How do you draw "gruff" and "scruff" hair?

I have said it before and I will say again:
These figures have no personality - they are just copies of something.
'Their eyes are still the same as their T-shirts - plain awful.
All four of them in the same colours - it is a n eye sore.

Others I asked said they liked the first set also. I want their eyes to match their shirts.

Tuffy is tough, Ruffy is rough, the other two are gruff and scruff, respectively. What are you talking about?

Why? No matter what anyone says, you go off on some deranged tirade and start babbling scripture. So you see Scrotum Sniffer, Godopholus has decided to make an example of you and will have your foreskin reattached and send you to Philotia where you will dine on the rectal discharge of Philotians.

How do I know this? Because Godopholus has been talking to me. Yup, there's no more time or energy on a lost cause such as you Goldilox. Sorry, that's just the way it goeth sometimes. It even says so in the lost books of the Bible in Shadrach 12; verse 8-19, Meshach 3, verses 94-122 and most notably in the most holy book of Abednego, chapter 33, verses 1 through 44.

Reading further, in the book of Mortimer, it says "Yea, verily I say unto all of thees, stray far into other lands and explore the body of both male and female, replicate and hibernate, fornicate and copulate, masturbate and capitulate. Be thee male, explore the male, be thee female, enjoy yon female. So saith I, the great creator of all, I am Godopholus. Bow, kneel, and make me a happy camper."

I am not arguing with Saab. I am genuinely curious to know what he's talking about.

Until of course they say something that you don't like.

Saab said something I didn't agree with- I didn't respond negatively to it.

I am asking for constructive criticism.

That would be a first.

You got constructive critisism. I a m repeating myself.
The four brothers look alike, have no personality, look just plain awful with eyes matching their T-shirts. Kids are not going to like them at all.
If others liked them it can be they are either polite to you or have no idea about any form of art.

I asked others- they liked the first set. Would it still be jarring if I varied how the characters looked a little more and still had the green and white color scheme?

I want the brothers to look alike.
You gave horrible examples of what you considered to be personality pics- my characters are humanized animals - not "normal" cats and dogs.

You are entitled to your opinion- I want these cats to look alike. Color schemes is a minor detail - it doesn't have to be overtly complex.

I think you can tell them apart just fine, even with all of them in the same color. I do like the different colors best, it gives more variety and interest. If you do them all the same your readers will just think you didn't have the time or creativity to come up with other ideas. I like the hair styles.

Thank you- how do you think it would look if I gave them different shades of green?

Another thing is that alll your figures are flat and not three dimesional. that way they have no life

Newsflash - most cartoons are 2-D.

http://www.melbpc.org.au/pcupdate/2107/2107article3-1.gif

Look at the two men. One is flat and uninteresting. The other one has a dimension, his head is shaded, his shoe has a bottom, etc etc. There is the difference to your flat brothers.

Most animated cartoons are 2-D. Most cartoon comics are 2-D.

What is 2-D?

Two-dimensional. Flat - only occupying length and width, not volume.

by the time you finish this "so called comic" your readers will be on social security.