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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Lash
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jun, 2018 06:11 pm
Plans of mice and men
Fevered hope and industry
But, what have you made?

Seizan
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jun, 2018 10:48 pm
@Lash,
"But what have YOU made?"
asked the mighty God of Man.
"I made you" said Man.
edgarblythe
 
  2  
Sun 3 Jun, 2018 07:38 am
@Seizan,
I made you, said man
I also made nuclear bombs
And Pepto Bismol
0 Replies
 
Lash
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jun, 2018 09:01 am
And Pepto Bismol
dripped down my stomach lining
Like a cat-lick purr
vonny
 
  2  
Sun 3 Jun, 2018 01:55 pm
@Lash,
Like a cat-lick purr
Smooth as silk, soft as satin
assaulting my ears
Lash
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jun, 2018 03:34 pm
@vonny,
Assaulting my ears,
thou slovenly whinge-merchant,
crying “bursitis!”
0 Replies
 
Lash
 
  1  
Tue 5 Jun, 2018 05:34 am
Crying bursitis
The whimpering Pekingese
Stretched out in the sun
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  2  
Tue 5 Jun, 2018 07:25 am
stretched out in the sun
oh kitty in the window
dreaming of dinner
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jun, 2018 01:21 am
@edgarblythe,
dreaming of dinner
big grey cat moves suddenly
enveloping mice
Lash
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jun, 2018 07:05 am
@Seizan,
Enveloping mice
In the bend of her fur-paw
She nestled them close
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jun, 2018 07:33 am
@Lash,
She nestled them close
at first they surrounded her
then things were reversed
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jun, 2018 04:03 pm
@Seizan,
then things were reversed
i was old in need of care
and i smiled, content
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jun, 2018 06:52 am
@edgarblythe,
and I smiled, content
personifying Cheshire
birds flee me in fear
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 7 Jun, 2018 02:39 pm
@tsarstepan,
birds flee me in fear
small creatures hide, terrified
behold me: kitten!
0 Replies
 
Lash
 
  1  
Fri 8 Jun, 2018 05:20 am
Behold me, kitten
My massive finger, aloft
Taunting your pink nose
Seizan
 
  2  
Sun 10 Jun, 2018 10:11 pm
@Lash,
Taunting your pink nose
Needle teeth and fishhook claws
reveal my folly
visceral
 
  1  
Thu 14 Jun, 2018 11:28 pm
@Seizan,
Reveal my folly
Don't trip over my dress please...
Magnolias blooming
Seizan
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jun, 2018 06:50 am
@visceral,
Magnolias blooming,
Spanish moss on old oak trees
Have a mint julep
visceral
 
  1  
Tue 19 Jun, 2018 11:27 pm
@Seizan,
Have a mint julep
Kick your shoes off, and lay back..
Soak up the sun, baby
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jun, 2018 12:26 am
@visceral,
Soak up the sun, baby
soon enough we'll hear it said:
light's out, everyone
0 Replies
 
 

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