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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
visceral
 
  1  
Fri 9 Mar, 2018 10:31 pm
@ekename,
Only to fall back,
Walk along the beach thinking..
as waves crash loudly
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Sat 10 Mar, 2018 05:47 am
@visceral,
As waves crash loudly
Gulls' raucous cries can be heard
Above tourists' heads
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 10 Mar, 2018 07:49 am
@edgarblythe,
Above tourists' heads
The fireworks burst brightly
With a punch of sound
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Sat 10 Mar, 2018 08:02 am
with a punch of sound
the bells toll in somberness
and the faithful pause
visceral
 
  1  
Sun 1 Apr, 2018 04:44 am
@edgarblythe,
and the faithful pause
seen largely in our card games
finds me turning red
ekename
 
  1  
Sun 1 Apr, 2018 07:26 am
@visceral,
Finds me turning red
And wild while tarot's jesters
Smile on this their day.
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 1 Apr, 2018 09:32 am
@ekename,
Smile on this their day,
As only pansies can smile
To welcome in Spring
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 2 Apr, 2018 03:42 am
@firefly,
To welcome in Spring,
To bask in the Summer sun -
My halcyon days...
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Mon 2 Apr, 2018 12:43 pm
@Seizan,
My halcyon days?
Let me check my calendar.
A roadmap to Zen?
Seizan
 
  2  
Mon 2 Apr, 2018 04:00 pm
@tsarstepan,
"A roadmap to Zen?"
The old Buddhist smiled at me
and my blank paper.
visceral
 
  1  
Tue 3 Apr, 2018 01:31 am
@Seizan,
and my blank paper..
Called to me for some wisdom
A profound thought lost
ekename
 
  1  
Tue 3 Apr, 2018 02:17 am
@visceral,
A profound thought lost
But a paradise regained
On a poet's page.
aidan
 
  1  
Tue 3 Apr, 2018 04:23 am
@ekename,
On a poet's page
syllables are psalms and songs
of life and longing.
0 Replies
 
visceral
 
  1  
Tue 3 Apr, 2018 10:45 am
@ekename,
On a poet's page
You are magically reborn
Golden boy shines through
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Tue 3 Apr, 2018 11:09 am
@visceral,
Golden boy shines through
a teenage protagonist
Urban Ulysses?
ekename
 
  1  
Tue 3 Apr, 2018 07:58 pm
@tsarstepan,
Urban Ulysses
Odysseus homer boy
Of life and longing
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 4 Apr, 2018 04:01 pm
@ekename,
Of life and longing,
Inexpressible feelings.
Artist's agony.
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Wed 4 Apr, 2018 06:04 pm
@Seizan,
artist's agony
wrests out form from a marble rock
artist's ecstacy
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 5 Apr, 2018 06:05 am
@edgarblythe,
Artist's ecstasy,
Artist's agony. Mirrored
images balance.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 5 Apr, 2018 06:59 am
@Seizan,
Images balance
between sunlight and darkness
eyes see what they see.
 

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