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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 20 Aug, 2017 04:47 am
@iamsam82,
To see my "doctor"
I burst through his "office door".
It was a closet.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Tue 22 Aug, 2017 02:52 am
@Seizan,
It was a closet.
I stood in the quiet darkness,
Saw more of all things.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Tue 29 Aug, 2017 07:15 am
@iamsam82,
Saw more of all things.
Hammer, frequently, at doubts.
Chisel at your dreams.
Seizan
 
  2  
Tue 29 Aug, 2017 10:52 pm
@iamsam82,
Chisel at your dreams.
Fully formed, they wait inside
for you to free them.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Wed 30 Aug, 2017 10:41 am
@Seizan,
For you to free them
Tear their tethers off; unchain
their minds from gray doubt.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Wed 30 Aug, 2017 01:57 pm
@tsarstepan,
Their minds from grey doubt,
Bricks of bored safety are made.
You weren't made for walls.
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 31 Aug, 2017 10:22 am
@iamsam82,
You weren't made for walls,
Too much boundless energy
Fly free little bird
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sat 2 Sep, 2017 06:01 am
@firefly,
Fly free, little bird.
Some birds aren't meant to be caged;
Their feathers are too bright.

(With thanks to S. King)
T-1000
 
  1  
Tue 12 Sep, 2017 01:11 pm
@iamsam82,
Their feathers too bright.
For viewing in the daytime.
Best seen in moonlight.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sun 24 Sep, 2017 04:29 am
@T-1000,
Best seen in moonlight,
The ting goes skrrrrah! Pap pap ka!
Skee-ya! Ku pum pum!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e_nrI9crkGg&t=40s
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 24 Sep, 2017 05:04 am
@iamsam82,
"Skee-ya! Ku pum pum!"
"What language is that?"" she laughed.
"My own", he replied...
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 06:40 am
@Seizan,
"My own", he replied...
"Nahaa!" stated his sister
"Ma likes me better."
firefly
 
  2  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 07:06 am
@tsarstepan,
"Ma likes me better"
Is the classic sibling taunt,
Think Abel said it?
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 04:38 pm
@tsarstepan,
"Ma likes me better."
So began the rivalry
of Cain and Abel.
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 04:40 pm
@firefly,
Think Abel said it?
Actually, I doubt it.
(busy hunting rocks).
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  2  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 05:19 pm
(busy hunting rocks)
don't look under that mountain
don't look in the sky
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 05:27 pm
@edgarblythe,
Don't look in the sky.
The god you seek is not there.
He takes it in shifts...
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 06:47 pm
He takes it in shifts
his universe has grown old
wrapped in sheets of stars
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 07:17 pm
@edgarblythe,
Wrapped in sheets of stars,
Baby God, fascinated,
creates a new world.
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Mon 25 Sep, 2017 07:25 pm
creates a new world
where's atlas when you need him
guess the turtle will do
 

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