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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 26 Apr, 2017 08:39 am
@Eady,
Lunch...and pinot gris,
Enjoyed in the gazebo,
Make for summer bliss
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Wed 26 Apr, 2017 12:08 pm
@firefly,
Make for summer bliss,
Pour me an Arnold Palmer.
The tree's shade bathes me
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 26 Apr, 2017 05:38 pm
@tsarstepan,
The tree's shade bathes me.
Trees do not apologize
to grass for its shade...
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Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 26 Apr, 2017 08:05 pm
Oops, grammar error too late to edit...

"Trees" being plural, they do not apologize to the grass for THEIR shade...

Paraphrased from a quote: "Be yourself. Trees do not apologize to the grass for making shade."

Please correct ... in your mind ...

:-\
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Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 26 Apr, 2017 08:12 pm
To grass for its shade
ants scurried out of the sun
in neat formation
visceral
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 01:36 am
@Seizan,
in neat formation
Birds chirping in nearby tree
Sweet harmony foun
d..
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 02:44 am
@visceral,
Sweet harmony found
breeze in trees, murmur of stream,
it's Beethoven's Sixth...
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 05:24 am
@Seizan,
it's Beethoven's Sixth...
The Fifth has nothing on the
Pastoral drama.
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 03:53 pm
@tsarstepan,
Pastoral drama,
dialogue of the seasons.
Thoreau got it right.
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 04:25 pm
@Seizan,
Thoreau got it right
eat seeds thistles and drink water
write about nature
chai2
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 05:50 pm
@edgarblythe,
write about nature
but not while natures calling
your pen will get wet
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 27 Apr, 2017 05:54 pm
@chai2,
Your pen will get wet,
paper gets soggy, ink runs,
You better run too.
visceral
 
  1  
Fri 28 Apr, 2017 12:57 am
@Seizan,
You better run too…
Do run run, the song repeats
as dusk comes quickly
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Fri 28 Apr, 2017 05:49 am
@visceral,
As dusk comes quickly
seek shelter from the terrors
that your mind forbode.
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 29 Apr, 2017 09:23 am
@tsarstepan,
That your mind forebode
Did not materialize,
A nightmare escaped

T-1000
 
  1  
Sat 29 Apr, 2017 12:55 pm
@firefly,
A nightmare escaped
Leaving the dreamer in fright
What a sorry plight
visceral
 
  2  
Sun 30 Apr, 2017 08:51 am
@T-1000,
What a sorry plight
My dog wants to go outside
And water the plants..
T-1000
 
  1  
Sun 30 Apr, 2017 12:22 pm
@visceral,
and water the plants..
and bring in the newspaper..
and roll in the grass..
vonny
 
  1  
Thu 4 May, 2017 02:41 pm
@T-1000,
and roll in the grass
all senses fully wakened
by sweet summer scents
Seizan
 
  1  
Fri 5 May, 2017 04:37 am
@vonny,
By sweet summer scents
and the laughter of children
June was ushered in
 

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