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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
T-1000
 
  1  
Sat 3 Dec, 2016 04:38 pm
@vonny,
before rock bottom,
i put all my faith in hope,
i feel like a dope
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 4 Dec, 2016 07:54 am
@T-1000,
I feel like a dope
Hopelessly lost, I'm in love
I act like a fool...
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 5 Dec, 2016 03:06 am
I act like a fool
Blind in the belief that I
Act with great wisdom
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 5 Dec, 2016 10:14 am
@Seizan,
Act with great wisdom
Is a really tall order,
Can't always be wise
vonny
 
  1  
Mon 5 Dec, 2016 02:45 pm
@firefly,
Can't always be wise
So often we fail - and fall
from grace, but survive
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 5 Dec, 2016 03:41 pm
@vonny,
From grace, but survive
Where is the "reset" button
for starting haiku
vonny
 
  1  
Mon 5 Dec, 2016 03:44 pm
@Seizan,
for starting haiku
begin by seeking peace and
solitude - then write
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 5 Dec, 2016 09:41 pm
@vonny,
Solitude -- then write
whether with pen, brush, or sound
the way of great art
firefly
 
  1  
Tue 6 Dec, 2016 10:46 am
@Seizan,
The way of great art
follows no set formula,
Yet it does compel
ossobucotemp
 
  1  
Tue 6 Dec, 2016 11:18 am
@firefly,
Yet it does compel,
although whom it compels oft
varies place to place.
Seizan
 
  1  
Tue 6 Dec, 2016 06:11 pm
@ossobucotemp,
"Varies place to place",
he said about gravity
as he floated off...
vonny
 
  1  
Sun 11 Dec, 2016 03:55 pm
@Seizan,
as he floated off
one hand raised in gesture of
farewell - he left us
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 11 Dec, 2016 09:50 pm
@vonny,
Farewell --left us
We turned away, empty heads
Waiting for the next
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Wed 14 Dec, 2016 02:40 pm
@Seizan,
Waiting for the next
great movie to allow me
to escape real life.
vonny
 
  1  
Wed 14 Dec, 2016 02:42 pm
@tsarstepan,
to escape real life
flying free and high above
sorrows left below
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Wed 14 Dec, 2016 03:26 pm
sorrows left below
like crayfish in a burrow
a deep muddy hole
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 15 Dec, 2016 06:00 am
@edgarblythe,
A deep muddy hole
where my heart used to be
you stole it real good
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 15 Dec, 2016 06:38 am
@Seizan,
You stole it real good.
You promised to bring it back.
Don't lie to my face.
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 15 Dec, 2016 07:44 am
@tsarstepan,
"Don't lie to my face!"
If I can't lie to your face
what can I lie to...?
vonny
 
  1  
Fri 16 Dec, 2016 02:47 pm
@Seizan,
what can I lie to...?
If I cannot lie to you
For you are the truth
 

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