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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Seizan
 
  2  
Wed 10 Aug, 2016 11:25 pm
@edgarblythe,
He leapt off and flew
flying is really great fun
landing hurts like hell
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 12 Aug, 2016 04:01 am
@Seizan,
Landing hurts like hell
When you pull a sweet bike jump
But the seat falls off.
Seizan
 
  1  
Fri 12 Aug, 2016 04:22 pm
@iamsam82,
"But the seat falls off...!"
A bicycle built for two
on a bumpy road.
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 13 Aug, 2016 02:33 pm
@Seizan,
on a bumpy road
of life we travel hoping
we'll arrive one day!
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sat 13 Aug, 2016 04:54 pm
@vonny,
We'll arrive one day
And regret the times we asked,
"Are we there yet?" Fools.
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Sat 13 Aug, 2016 07:44 pm
are we there yet? fools.
fools as on a ship of fools
slipping by icebergs
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 02:02 am
@edgarblythe,
Slipping by icebergs
each in their own Titanic
with their eyes wide shut
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 04:17 am
@Seizan,
With their eyes wide shut,
The leaders pushed dots on maps;
Pipe smoke masked cordite.
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 07:22 am
@iamsam82,
Pipe smoke masked cordite
smell of napalm in the morn
it's not a movie...
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 08:27 am
@Seizan,
It's not a movie!
It's not a horror, Twilight,
With veggie vampires.
vonny
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 01:24 pm
@iamsam82,
With veggie vampires
creating veggie dishes
Comedy unfolds
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 04:54 pm
@vonny,
Comedy unfolds
but tragedy crashes down
glass shards and splinters
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Sun 14 Aug, 2016 07:47 pm
glass shards and splinters
in the minds of the victims
their children escape
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 15 Aug, 2016 12:37 am
@edgarblythe,
Their children escape.
they can never know the fears
their elders grew by

(Sorry, a slight paraphrase of CSN&Y song, but seemed so apropos here)
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 15 Aug, 2016 07:13 am
@Seizan,
Their children escape.
It's each generation's gift
To bury the last.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 18 Aug, 2016 09:48 am
@iamsam82,
To bury the last
Means, perforce, they were not last.
Lonely the digger.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 18 Aug, 2016 09:50 am
@iamsam82,
Anyone fancy writing a Haiku together?

http://able2know.org/topic/338681-1
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Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 21 Aug, 2016 06:05 am
@iamsam82,
Lonely the digger
drops shovel, clutches breast, falls
no one fills the grave
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 24 Aug, 2016 07:19 am
@Seizan,
No one fills the grave
No one to wield the shovel
Charon's unemployed...
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 24 Aug, 2016 07:27 am
@Seizan,
Charon's unemployed!
Great joy and equal sadness
in the last crossing
 

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