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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
vonny
 
  2  
Sun 17 Jul, 2016 01:35 pm
@Seizan,
Sadly mistaken
An error that will one day
Cost too many lives
Seizan
 
  2  
Sun 17 Jul, 2016 03:04 pm
@vonny,
Cost too many lives
smiling generals, both sides
collecting their pay
vonny
 
  2  
Mon 18 Jul, 2016 01:50 pm
@Seizan,
Collecting their pay
not a thought in their minds for
lost hopes or lost lives
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 18 Jul, 2016 10:05 pm
@vonny,
Lost hopes or lost lives
Once lost are gone forever
Unless one has faith
vonny
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jul, 2016 02:23 pm
@Seizan,
Unless one has faith
where do we start to begin?
Our purpose is lost
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jul, 2016 05:42 pm
@vonny,
Our purpose is lost
groping with hands, minds, and souls
let's find another
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 28 Jul, 2016 04:25 am
@Seizan,
Let's find another
Sun who clings not like honey;
Soothes like his sea-twin.
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 28 Jul, 2016 07:15 am
@iamsam82,
Soothes like his sea-twin,
irritates like his earth-twin.
Oops - what does he eat...?
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Thu 28 Jul, 2016 08:46 am
oops - what does he eat?
what odiferous slop pail?
what nourishment foul?
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 28 Jul, 2016 03:17 pm
@edgarblythe,
What nourishment foul
I found in feeding senses.
Starve them; feed the soul.
Seizan
 
  2  
Thu 28 Jul, 2016 03:27 pm
@iamsam82,
Starve them, feed the soul
though their bellies all cry out
that they can't eat faith.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 29 Jul, 2016 03:48 am
@Seizan,
That they can't eat faith,
I concur, though I affirm
Bread alone sates not.
Seizan
 
  1  
Fri 29 Jul, 2016 06:47 am
@iamsam82,
Bread alone sates not.
Faith alone also sates not.
Let there be balance.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Fri 29 Jul, 2016 09:51 am
@Seizan,
Let there be balance,
Lark and dove, but most of all -
Please - let there be love.
Seizan
 
  2  
Fri 29 Jul, 2016 03:48 pm
@iamsam82,
Please - let there be love
Spite and hate - leave in the dust
It's never too late.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Sat 30 Jul, 2016 02:43 am
@Seizan,
It's never too late -
Except for parachutists
Who put on rucksacks.
Seizan
 
  2  
Sat 30 Jul, 2016 04:45 am
@iamsam82,
Who put on rucksacks
Look forward to their packed lunch
Oops - I packed cat food...
ossobucotemp
 
  1  
Sat 30 Jul, 2016 02:50 pm
@Seizan,
Oops - I packed cat food...
instead of albacore for
my lunchtime delight!
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Sat 30 Jul, 2016 03:16 pm
my lunchtime delight
shared with a dog named rocky
two buds, summer day
Seizan
 
  1  
Sat 30 Jul, 2016 04:45 pm
@edgarblythe,
Two buds, summer day,
thunderstorm in the distance,
reflection of life.
 

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