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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Miss L Toad
 
  2  
Wed 8 Jun, 2016 09:34 pm
@Seizan,
Nightmare on Elm Street
Bark beetle and sac fungi
All the falling leaves
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2016 10:42 pm
All the falling leaves
cannot be as heavy as
this pain in my heart.
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  2  
Wed 8 Jun, 2016 10:45 pm
"This pain in my heart -
it's indigestion" he said.
His famous last words.
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  2  
Wed 8 Jun, 2016 10:46 pm
His famous last words:
"Tell them I said something great..."
No one remembered.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Thu 9 Jun, 2016 07:19 am
@Seizan,
No one remembered
who was buried in Grant's Tomb.
Sad state of affairs.
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Thu 9 Jun, 2016 08:29 am
Sad state of affairs.
The rabbit runs down the hole.
Alice is too fat...
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  2  
Sat 11 Jun, 2016 05:35 pm
Alice is too fat.
"These pills make you tall or short.
Which one makes me thin?"
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Sat 11 Jun, 2016 05:37 pm
Which one makes me thin?
Too much sugar, too much salt?
Neither one will do.
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Sat 11 Jun, 2016 05:39 pm
"Neither one will do."
Old man walks out of the shop.
The truth is, he's broke...
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 11 Jun, 2016 05:57 pm
@Seizan,
The truth is, he's broke...
a state many have lived through,
or not. Talk with him.
Seizan
 
  1  
Sat 11 Jun, 2016 07:09 pm
@ossobuco,
...or not -- talk with him.
He has the experience.
Maybe he won't say...
0 Replies
 
Seizan
 
  1  
Sun 12 Jun, 2016 01:18 am
Maybe he won't say.
We have to live it ourselves
When we become old...
vonny
 
  2  
Mon 13 Jun, 2016 01:10 pm
@Seizan,
When we become old
will we walk with gnarled hands on
knotted wooden sticks
Seizan
 
  1  
Mon 13 Jun, 2016 05:36 pm
@vonny,
Knotted wooden sticks.
Gnarled old hands grasping them with
loving dependence.
vonny
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2016 02:29 pm
@Seizan,
loving dependence
fingers entwined with fingers
Til death us do part
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  2  
Tue 14 Jun, 2016 04:47 pm
til death do us part
in life so sweetly we bond
sadly one goes first
ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2016 05:35 pm
@edgarblythe,
Sadly one goes first
into the chamber of fear
and can't tell the next
Seizan
 
  1  
Tue 14 Jun, 2016 07:38 pm
@ossobuco,
"...and can't tell the next."
The secret has been well kept
since before we were.
vonny
 
  1  
Wed 15 Jun, 2016 01:38 pm
@Seizan,
since before we were
here - we floated endlessly
Each breath a heartbeat
Seizan
 
  2  
Wed 15 Jun, 2016 08:54 pm
@vonny,
Each breath a heartbeat
Each heartbeat a whole lifetime
Each lifetime a blink
 

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