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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
vonny
 
  1  
Wed 3 Sep, 2014 04:31 am
@Diane,
God, they are people.
Mere specks on this planet earth
And see how they run!

oristarA
 
  1  
Thu 4 Sep, 2014 08:38 am
@vonny,
And see how they run
A gauntlet of criticism!
God watch it cold-eyed.
vonny
 
  1  
Sun 7 Sep, 2014 07:53 am
@oristarA,
God watch it cold-eyed.
momentarily it seemed
forsaken? But no ...
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 7 Sep, 2014 09:36 am
@vonny,
But no ... you can't go
to school wearing that wrinkled
dress. Here, try this one.
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 7 Sep, 2014 10:37 am
@ossobuco,
dress. Here, try this one,
It will fit you perfectly,
You look like a Queen
Lustig Andrei
 
  1  
Sun 7 Sep, 2014 01:35 pm
@firefly,
You look like a Queen
With that tiara sitting
On top of your head.
vonny
 
  1  
Tue 9 Sep, 2014 04:53 am
@Lustig Andrei,
On top of your head.
Upside down and standing still
In yoga posture
firefly
 
  1  
Tue 9 Sep, 2014 12:15 pm
@vonny,
In yoga posture,
In the lotus position,
Affirm your being
vonny
 
  1  
Tue 9 Sep, 2014 01:29 pm
@firefly,
Affirm your being
Or are you so sure of life
A gift or a curse
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 10 Sep, 2014 12:01 pm
@vonny,
A gift or a curse
Is an extremely long life?
Well, it all depends
ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 10 Sep, 2014 02:13 pm
@firefly,
Well, it all depends,
doesn't it, if Depends are
available there.
vonny
 
  1  
Mon 15 Sep, 2014 12:53 pm
@ossobuco,
available there
available where, she cried
her face screwed up tight
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 15 Sep, 2014 01:52 pm
@vonny,
Her face screwed up tight
As she tried to fight back tears,
But emotion won













vonny
 
  1  
Tue 30 Sep, 2014 02:00 pm
@firefly,
But emotion won
She had tried so very hard -
but she cried ... and cried
Smileyrius
 
  1  
Sun 12 Oct, 2014 11:02 am
@vonny,
but she cried... and cried
until no more could she find
the tears from within
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 12 Oct, 2014 12:26 pm
@Smileyrius,
The tears from within
Burst forth like a summer storm,
Followed by a calm
Smileyrius
 
  1  
Mon 13 Oct, 2014 07:04 pm
@firefly,
Followed by a calm
words began to form themselves
freely in her heart
vonny
 
  1  
Tue 14 Oct, 2014 04:05 am
@Smileyrius,
freely in her heart
she loved with wild passion - but
motionless - so still
Smileyrius
 
  1  
Tue 14 Oct, 2014 04:58 am
@vonny,
Motionless - so still
The ticks and tocks grew louder
As the clock mocked her
vonny
 
  1  
Tue 14 Oct, 2014 11:52 am
@Smileyrius,
As the clock mocked her
Louder and louder - stop stop
She crumpled and fell
 

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