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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 5 Jun, 2014 03:43 pm
@ehBeth,
I laugh constantly,
Everything seems quite absurd,
Is life just a joke?
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jun, 2014 09:32 am
@firefly,
Is life just a joke?
Clowns screaming insanities
laughter silenced now
0 Replies
 
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 7 Jun, 2014 10:01 am
Laughter silenced now
that so much violence goes
on over the world.
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 11 Jun, 2014 11:03 am
@ossobuco,
On, over the world
Is the firmament above,
Canopy of stars
ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 11 Jun, 2014 11:32 pm
@firefly,
Canopy of stars,
that I don't understand there
in the mohave.


This is true, as I am night blind, I see few if any stars, and I first learned that after a ski trip when we got caught with a flat tire in the Mohave. I didn't know I was different before that night.
vonny
 
  1  
Fri 13 Jun, 2014 04:24 am
@ossobuco,
in the mohave
'neath black velvet firmament
I'm kneeling in awe
firefly
 
  1  
Fri 13 Jun, 2014 12:41 pm
@vonny,
I'm kneeling in awe
Of the power of windstorms,
Tornado's fury
vonny
 
  1  
Sun 15 Jun, 2014 02:49 pm
@firefly,
Tornado's fury
Destroying all before her
'Cease' I cry out 'Cease'
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 15 Jun, 2014 03:16 pm
@vonny,
'Cease' I cry out 'Cease'
But the pain still continues,
My cries go unheard
vonny
 
  1  
Sun 15 Jun, 2014 03:30 pm
@firefly,
My cries go unheard
I bow my head in sorrow
join my sobs to theirs
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 22 Jun, 2014 10:10 am
@vonny,
Join my sobs to theirs,
Those who bury their loved ones,
Innocent victims of war
ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 5 Jul, 2014 08:01 pm
@firefly,
(adjusting first line back to 5 syllables)

those victims of war
unsuspecting children and
families wept for

vonny
 
  1  
Sun 6 Jul, 2014 02:56 pm
@ehBeth,
families wept for
thousand million sons of war
Cry me a nation
0 Replies
 
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 6 Jul, 2014 03:46 pm
Cry me a nation,
cry the dispossess'd, moving
away fast, or slow.
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Fri 25 Jul, 2014 10:09 pm
@ossobuco,
away fast, or slow.
there, I saw my life speed by.
life, a mystery.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 26 Jul, 2014 08:44 am
@Daisy Ryder,
Life, a mystery,
full of tedium followed
by surprise and joy.
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 26 Jul, 2014 09:11 am
@ossobuco,
By surprise and joy
The bad days are balanced out,
Strength becomes renewed
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Tue 29 Jul, 2014 09:04 am
@firefly,
Strength becomes renewed.
And just as the flowers bloom,
The mind is opened.
Lustig Andrei
 
  1  
Tue 29 Jul, 2014 09:24 am
@Daisy Ryder,
The mind is opened
To the glory of the world.
New beauty is born.
Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 29 Jul, 2014 05:36 pm
@Lustig Andrei,
New beauty is born
Out of the dust of the earth
Let the soft rain fall
 

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