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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Mon 24 Mar, 2014 03:00 pm
@vonny,
Kneel down on green sward.
A heavy rain on green leaves.
Fingers pressed in earth.
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 24 Mar, 2014 03:44 pm
@Daisy Ryder,
Fingers pressed in earth
Give gardeners satisfaction,
They plant the future
vonny
 
  2  
Mon 24 Mar, 2014 03:49 pm
@firefly,
They plant the future
As the seeds of doubt are sown
Gardeners of sorrow
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Wed 26 Mar, 2014 09:27 am
@vonny,
Gardeners of sorrow.
Yet through trial and error.
Begins the blossoms.
FOUND SOUL
 
  1  
Wed 26 Mar, 2014 05:27 pm
@Daisy Ryder,
Begins the blossoms
That bare the fruit
Ripe and delectable
vonny
 
  1  
Thu 27 Mar, 2014 04:16 am
@FOUND SOUL,
Ripe delectable
Sweet juices burst forth and run
with mingling flavours
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Thu 27 Mar, 2014 09:09 am
@vonny,
With mingling flavours.
With a palet of colours.
Tasty perspective.
FOUND SOUL
 
  1  
Thu 27 Mar, 2014 02:41 pm
@Daisy Ryder,
Tasty perspective
follows the taste buds
as I breathe in the cultural smells
FOUND SOUL
 
  1  
Thu 27 Mar, 2014 03:44 pm
@FOUND SOUL,
grrr

Tasty perspective
glistens on to the taste buds
slides onto the tongue
vonny
 
  1  
Thu 27 Mar, 2014 03:51 pm
@FOUND SOUL,
slides onto the tongue
with sensuous ease - so slow
Rich and indulgent
FOUND SOUL
 
  1  
Sat 29 Mar, 2014 03:39 pm
@vonny,
rich and indulgent
the chocolate cake was fine
eaten very slowly
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 29 Mar, 2014 03:42 pm
@FOUND SOUL,
eaten very slowly
Savouring each tiny bite
with satisfaction
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Mon 7 Apr, 2014 12:12 pm
@vonny,
With satisfaction.
The late night comes to an end.
Touch, slow and steady.
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 7 Apr, 2014 01:57 pm
@Daisy Ryder,
Touch, slow and steady,
Makes for a perfect massage,
It's so relaxing
vonny
 
  1  
Mon 7 Apr, 2014 02:03 pm
@firefly,
It's so relaxing
to walk along ocean edge
the sea laps my toes
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Sun 13 Apr, 2014 09:20 am
@vonny,
The sea laps my toes.
It was a wonderful dream.
Until I awoke.
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 13 Apr, 2014 10:11 am
@Daisy Ryder,
Until I awoke,
I did not know you had gone,
Then I found the note
vonny
 
  1  
Sun 13 Apr, 2014 02:12 pm
@firefly,
Then I found the note
Life ceased momentarily
Then my life went on
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 13 Apr, 2014 05:42 pm
@vonny,
Then my life went on,
But seemed as in slow motion,
And seen through a fog
vonny
 
  1  
Mon 14 Apr, 2014 04:11 am
@firefly,
And seen through a fog
Past swirling columns of grey
Life's looking better
 

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