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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  1  
Tue 20 Dec, 2011 10:54 pm
@Dutchy,
Stills the broken heart,
And promises a new joy,
When he smiles at you
Lustig Andrei
 
  1  
Tue 20 Dec, 2011 10:57 pm
@firefly,
When he smiles at you
The boy with wide trusting eyes
Excites with his smile.
firefly
 
  2  
Thu 22 Dec, 2011 10:53 am
@Lustig Andrei,
Excites with his smile
And invites with his warm eyes,
Who can resist him?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 22 Dec, 2011 02:54 pm
@firefly,
Who can resist him?
The man with the bronzed body,
awaiting to please.
Diane
 
  1  
Thu 22 Dec, 2011 04:03 pm
@Dutchy,
Awaiting to please
Eyes bright, ready, tail wagging
I love Sally's smile.
reasoning logic
 
  1  
Thu 22 Dec, 2011 05:46 pm
@Diane,
I love Sally's smile
Its such a caring smile
Its like Diane's smile
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 29 Dec, 2011 08:20 pm
@reasoning logic,
It's like Diane's smile
Soft, warm, and reassuring,
Like a giant hug
Rockhead
 
  1  
Thu 29 Dec, 2011 08:26 pm
@firefly,
like a giant hug
kind words from far away friends
warm your heart at night
Lustig Andrei
 
  1  
Thu 29 Dec, 2011 08:26 pm
@firefly,
Like a giant hug
Emotion overwhelms me.
I feel so very small.
0 Replies
 
Lustig Andrei
 
  1  
Thu 29 Dec, 2011 08:27 pm
oops Embarrassed
0 Replies
 
firefly
 
  1  
Fri 30 Dec, 2011 11:06 am
@Rockhead,
Warm your heart at night
By doing a small good deed
To spread happiness
Lustig Andrei
 
  1  
Fri 30 Dec, 2011 12:40 pm
@firefly,
To spread hapiness
Is my earnest desire but
I'm not good at it.
firefly
 
  2  
Fri 30 Dec, 2011 02:40 pm
@Lustig Andrei,
I'm not good at it
Or at any sport really,
I'm a spectator
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 2 Jan, 2012 02:22 pm
@firefly,
I'm a spectator.
It demands an absent mind,
and a present heart.
firefly
 
  2  
Tue 3 Jan, 2012 12:07 pm
@Dutchy,
And a present heart
Defines the word compassion,
I can feel your pain
fobvius
 
  1  
Tue 3 Jan, 2012 08:18 pm
@firefly,
I can feel your pain
I daren't look at your pleasure
Sunny summer days
Diane
 
  3  
Tue 3 Jan, 2012 08:39 pm
@fobvius,
Sunny summer days
Happiness surrounds us all
Keep the memories.











Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 4 Jan, 2012 12:07 am
@Diane,
Keep the memories.
The past has left us truly,
Look to future.
firefly
 
  2  
Wed 4 Jan, 2012 03:54 pm
@Dutchy,
Look to future
Possibilities with hope,
That's optimism
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 4 Jan, 2012 08:36 pm
@firefly,
That's optimism.
Alerting that darkness comes,
fading at sunrise.

 

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