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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2011 04:38 pm
@firefly,
Try some and you'll see.
I guess I'll have more cake, then,
maybe not so bad.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Fri 1 Jul, 2011 04:51 pm
@Dutchy,
Maybe not so bad
to be a lad on a lark,
searching for treasure.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2011 06:29 pm
@ossobuco,
Searching for treasure.
Tall they are while majestic,
Castles are treasures.

ragnel
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2011 11:08 pm
@Dutchy,
Castles are treasures
But I always manage to
Fall into the moat.
fobvius
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2011 11:50 pm
@ragnel,
Fall into the moat
Encompassing ev'ry moit
In a changing whirl.
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 2 Jul, 2011 09:05 am
@fobvius,
In a changing whirl
I finally pick a dress,
I'll dazzle tonight
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2011 03:13 pm
@firefly,
I'll dazzle tonight.
I read this one about ten times,
enchanting each time.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2011 04:24 pm
@Dutchy,
enchanting each time
you said the poetry, both
of you. Memories.

(there's a story behind that, she laughs.)
ragnel
 
  2  
Mon 4 Jul, 2011 06:21 am
@ossobuco,
Of you, memories
are always bright and bubbly!
I'll never forget!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 4 Jul, 2011 04:38 pm
@ragnel,
I'll never forget.
Twilight alights the blue sky,
cool grass smells so sweet.
farmerman
 
  1  
Mon 4 Jul, 2011 05:55 pm
@Dutchy,
cool grass smells so sweet
when a field is finely cut
swallows dart and dive
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edgarblythe
 
  1  
Mon 4 Jul, 2011 07:39 pm
swallows dart and dive
arrow swift and smart and sure
their return assured
ragnel
 
  2  
Mon 4 Jul, 2011 11:09 pm
@edgarblythe,
Their return assured,
the suddenly graceful geese
fly to warmer climes.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 5 Jul, 2011 01:04 am
@ragnel,
Fly to warmer climes.
Hint of a beautiful day,
there's gardenwork to do.
firefly
 
  2  
Wed 6 Jul, 2011 09:30 am
@Dutchy,
There's gardenwork to do,
But a nice cool pool beckons,
And I can't resist
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 8 Jul, 2011 05:57 am
@firefly,
And I can't resist.
Make swimming pool dreams come true,
why are you still dry?
firefly
 
  2  
Fri 8 Jul, 2011 07:12 pm
@Dutchy,
Why are you still dry
When you're standing in the rain?
I'm truly baffled
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 8 Jul, 2011 08:11 pm
@firefly,
I'm truly baffled .
Not hard to ruffle your feathers,
strip and dive in nude.
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 13 Jul, 2011 10:08 am
@Dutchy,
Strip and dive in nude,
Skinny dipping can be fun.
Want to try it now?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 13 Jul, 2011 04:18 pm
@firefly,
Want to try it now?
Would you be so game, to
lead me to the water?
 

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