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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  2  
Tue 10 May, 2011 07:52 pm
@hamburgboy,
Get the sauceboat ready,
Thanksgiving turkey is done,
Who'll do the carving?

Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 11 May, 2011 12:40 am
@firefly,
Who'll do the carving?
Do you trust me with a bird?
You won't regret it.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 11 May, 2011 06:37 am
@Dutchy,
You won't regret it.
Your investment will be paid
back in horsefeathers.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 11 May, 2011 08:34 pm
@ossobuco,
Back in horsefeathers.
You are indeed generous,
can you afford it?
laughoutlood
 
  1  
Wed 11 May, 2011 08:39 pm
@Dutchy,
Can you afford it?
Crossing winter's only stream
Through one endless night.
firefly
 
  2  
Thu 12 May, 2011 09:32 am
@laughoutlood,
Through one endless night
Insomnia kept me up,
Lord, please let me sleep!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 13 May, 2011 06:47 am
@firefly,
Lord, please let me sleep!
Just before I drift to sleep,
wonder what I'll dream.
spendius
 
  3  
Fri 13 May, 2011 07:27 am
@Dutchy,
**For those who feel that last line of firefly's, and it does make one sympathise with anyone who says it so achingly, here is a little quote from Francois Rabelais--

"Then came the hour when sleep,the Heavens' gift,
Comes graciously to greet weary mankind."

Anybody who runs that through their soft-pillowed heads with the various intonations of a hypnotist will soon be spark out.

It's in the dream stuff, which Freud made such a mess of, in Book Three, Chapter 14. It is quite amusing. And as scholarly as modern scholars are unable to match.

wonder what I'll dream.
I know! Under summer appleboughs
I collect gold coins
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 14 May, 2011 12:04 am
@spendius,
You match it perfectly spendi. Cool

I collect gold coins.
Collecting nectar from blooms,
eating honey pods.
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 21 May, 2011 11:34 am
@Dutchy,
Eating honey pods
From the honey locust trees
Was a Native food
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 22 May, 2011 12:23 am
@firefly,
Was a Native food.
Dinner, two old friends become
lovers entangled.
laughoutlood
 
  1  
Sun 22 May, 2011 02:00 am
@Dutchy,
Lovers entangled
on the shoulders of giants
and golden edges
firefly
 
  2  
Wed 25 May, 2011 12:03 am
@laughoutlood,
And golden edges
Framed her portrait perfectly
Above the mantel
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 25 May, 2011 01:07 am
@firefly,
Above the mantel.
The astounding wealth we haven,
it’s really nothing.
laughoutlood
 
  2  
Wed 25 May, 2011 02:21 am
@Dutchy,
It's really nothing
like falling leaves and sunshine
in an autumn breeze.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 25 May, 2011 05:11 am
@laughoutlood,
in an autumn breeze.
The soothing rain, a bright flash,
the dark sky grumbles.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 25 May, 2011 08:14 am
The dark sky grumbles,
thunder sounds the base for the
roaring winds of time.
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 25 May, 2011 06:51 pm
@ossobuco,
Roaring winds of time
Blew out my birthday candles
When I turned ninety
ossobuco
 
  2  
Wed 25 May, 2011 07:00 pm
@firefly,
When I turned ninety
I woke with disbelief to
find such age so soon.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 26 May, 2011 04:08 am
@ossobuco,
find such ago so soon.
The vast wisdom of old age,
but is it worth it?
 

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