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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 10 Apr, 2011 04:56 am
@ragnel,
Drive on the right.
Pass you on the right, I win,
morning, officer.
ehBeth
 
  2  
Sun 10 Apr, 2011 10:38 am
@Dutchy,
Morning officer

makes us wake up spritely-like,

whistling tunelessly.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 10 Apr, 2011 10:07 pm
@ehBeth,
whistling tunelessly.

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Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 10 Apr, 2011 10:08 pm
@ehBeth,
whistling tunelessly.
Hearing the engine whistling,
waiting at the tracks.

firefly
 
  1  
Sun 10 Apr, 2011 10:23 pm
@Dutchy,
Waiting at the tracks
Because your train is delayed,
Feels like forever
ragnel
 
  2  
Sun 10 Apr, 2011 10:29 pm
@firefly,
Feels like forever
Since I saw your smiling face.
Come back to me soon!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 11 Apr, 2011 03:06 am
@ragnel,
Came back to me soon.
Succumbing to midnight lust,
please leave your door open.

ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 11 Apr, 2011 09:29 am
@Dutchy,
Please leave your door open
so the flies can get in and
provide distraction.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 11 Apr, 2011 09:55 pm
@ossobuco,
provide distraction.
That's not what I had in mind,
you should know better.
Rockhead
 
  1  
Mon 11 Apr, 2011 09:58 pm
@Dutchy,
you should know better
than to think you have a clue
what a woman thinks.
firefly
 
  2  
Mon 11 Apr, 2011 10:21 pm
@Rockhead,
What a woman thinks
Is often not said aloud
If she is discreet
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 12:39 am
@firefly,
If she is discreet.
Have yet to meet such a doll,
they all love to talk!
ragnel
 
  2  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 12:42 am
@Dutchy,
'They' all love to talk
About what we women think.
They don't have a clue!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 12:45 am
@ragnel,
They don't have a clue.
Nevertheless I admit,
we love them dearly.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 03:58 pm
@Dutchy,
We love them dearly.
Nearly as much as we love
Reflections in glass.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 04:09 pm
@iamsam82,
Reflections in glass
mirror images our minds
let us see: smile now.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 07:47 pm
@ossobuco,
let us see: smile now.
He slides his hand into hers,
her smile is his world.

firefly
 
  2  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 08:29 pm
@Dutchy,
Her smile is his world,
His first born child, his daughter,
Asleep in her crib

tsarstepan
 
  2  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 09:46 pm
@firefly,
Asleep in her crib
the cub forgets she's a bear
Bear hugs teddy bear
Dutchy
 
  2  
Tue 12 Apr, 2011 11:26 pm
@tsarstepan,
Bear hugs teddy bear.
Prefer to hug a female,
they are just so cute.
 

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