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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 20 Dec, 2010 10:44 pm
@ragnel,
Happy be your day.
I drift along with the breeze,
and enjoy my life.
ragnel
 
  2  
Thu 23 Dec, 2010 04:08 am
@Dutchy,
And enjoy my life
Is just what I hope to do!
If I am lucky!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 23 Dec, 2010 05:33 am
@ragnel,
If I am lucky.
Chocolate, roses, and rings,
won't make her love you.
ragnel
 
  2  
Tue 28 Dec, 2010 01:28 am
@Dutchy,
Won't make her love you,
But you could make her take note
By patting her dog.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 28 Dec, 2010 02:08 am
@ragnel,
By patting her dog.
I lick your sleeping face,
wake up play with me.
ragnel
 
  2  
Tue 28 Dec, 2010 02:27 am
@Dutchy,
"Wake up! Play with me!"
The toddler pushed and pulled at
His dozing grandad.



(Dutchy, Help is needed by James34 in the Lovatts forum - I think it's a cryptic in the UK 229 issue. Want to check it out?)
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 28 Dec, 2010 03:46 am
@ragnel,
His dozing grandad.
Walking the usual route,
on my way to work.

Thanks Ragnel, have already wrecked my brains over that one, to no avail. Smile
ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 9 Jan, 2011 09:52 am
@Dutchy,
On my way to work,
waving and nodding to friends,
good start to a day.
hamburgboy
 
  1  
Sun 9 Jan, 2011 10:06 am
@ehBeth,
good start to the day
to hear the furnace running
seeing the bright sun
ehBeth
 
  3  
Sun 9 Jan, 2011 10:11 am
@hamburgboy,
Seeing the bright sun
making the snow sparkle, we
are weather-deceived.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 10 Jan, 2011 02:09 am
@ehBeth,
are weather-deceived.
Death and taxes I can deal with,
cold weather not quite.
ragnel
 
  1  
Tue 11 Jan, 2011 07:57 pm
@Dutchy,
Cold weather? Not quite!
Sticky, stinky, cloying warmth.
Midsummer doldrums.
hamburgboy
 
  1  
Tue 11 Jan, 2011 08:02 pm
@ragnel,
midsummer doldrums
oh how much we miss them now
just survive winter
Rockhead
 
  2  
Tue 11 Jan, 2011 08:03 pm
@hamburgboy,
just survive winter
keeping your heart nice and warm
one log at a time
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 11 Jan, 2011 09:00 pm
@Rockhead,
One log at a time.
I'm finding a moment's peace,
pondering this life.

ragnel
 
  2  
Sun 16 Jan, 2011 10:14 pm
@Dutchy,
Pondering this life
Can lead to a change in pace,
Or another drink.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 16 Jan, 2011 10:21 pm
@ragnel,
Or another drink.
I don’t know who made it so,
But I’ll celebrate. Drunk
ragnel
 
  2  
Mon 17 Jan, 2011 09:00 pm
@Dutchy,
But I'll celebrate
With the very best of them!
And damn the arse holes! Drunk
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 17 Jan, 2011 11:12 pm
@ragnel,
And damn the arse holes! Drunk
I shudder to hear those remarks,
from one so refined.
hamburgboy
 
  1  
Tue 18 Jan, 2011 02:53 pm
@Dutchy,
from one so refined
we will hear the finest sounds
so listen up all !
 

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