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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Pemerson
 
  2  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 07:12 pm
@firefly,
Makes one feel hopeful
in a dry, desert region
to feel a drop of rain
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 07:42 pm
@Pemerson,
to feel a drop of rain
I see the rivers empty
filling distant lakes
Pemerson
 
  1  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 07:54 pm
@Dutchy,
filling distant lakes
is a good thing to do
It's restful to the eye
ragnel
 
  2  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 07:57 pm
@Pemerson,
Restful to the eye,
Peaceful to my throbbing ears.
The lake at twilight.
Pemerson
 
  1  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 07:59 pm
@ragnel,
The lake at twilight
reflects the darkening sky
sometimes a little spooky
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 08:01 pm
@ragnel,
The lake at twilight.
Is such a glorious sight,
with a glowing sun.
Pemerson
 
  2  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 08:19 pm
@Dutchy,
with a flowing sun
it could be nice
to swim nude
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 22 Jun, 2010 09:41 pm
@Pemerson,
to swim nude
would raise eyebrows perhaps,
on a local beach.
ragnel
 
  2  
Wed 23 Jun, 2010 07:09 pm
@Dutchy,
On a local beach
In summer one sees thousands
Enjoying the sun.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 23 Jun, 2010 07:36 pm
@ragnel,
Enjoying the sun.
Going to movies is fun,
backstalls is cosy.
ragnel
 
  2  
Thu 24 Jun, 2010 02:39 am
@Dutchy,
Backstalls is cosy
Till the usher shines his torch -
"What are you up to?"
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 24 Jun, 2010 02:51 am
@ragnel,
"What are you up to?"
Grazing my cheek with your kiss ,
platonic friendship.
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 24 Jun, 2010 04:30 am
@Dutchy,
Platonic friendship
Is the highest form of love,
Chaste but passionate
ragnel
 
  2  
Thu 24 Jun, 2010 10:26 pm
@firefly,
Chaste but passionate
Was a fair way to describe
Mother Theresa.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 24 Jun, 2010 11:11 pm
@ragnel,
Mother Teresa.
A truly remarkable
woman and sincere.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 25 Jun, 2010 08:24 am
@Dutchy,
Woman and sincere?
Her words, water-spelt in sun;
Her eyes, unfocused.
firefly
 
  2  
Fri 25 Jun, 2010 08:55 am
@iamsam82,
Her eyes unfocused,
She invited the music
To pierce her essence
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 26 Jun, 2010 06:38 am
@firefly,
To pierce her essence.
Cat vomit hairball somewhere,
will find in morning.
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 26 Jun, 2010 07:43 am
@Dutchy,
Will find in morning,
I know I didn't lose them,
Keys just like to hide
spendius
 
  2  
Sat 26 Jun, 2010 03:22 pm
@firefly,
Keys just like to hide
Where you least expect them to.
Sometimes you find them.
 

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