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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
spendius
 
  1  
Fri 28 May, 2010 05:13 am
@Dutchy,
in age old splendour
I gaze at the passing scene.
It's not like it was.
firefly
 
  2  
Fri 28 May, 2010 09:31 am
@spendius,
It's not like it was
Back when I was growing up,
Life was simple then
Dutchy
 
  2  
Fri 28 May, 2010 08:35 pm
@firefly,
Life was simple then.
No i-Pad or computer games,
just plain old marbles play.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Fri 28 May, 2010 09:05 pm
@Dutchy,
plain old marbles play
with gravity falling down
the Rube Goldberg chute
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 30 May, 2010 07:21 am
@tsarstepan,
The Rube Goldberg chute
Was a lot of fun to watch,
Such complexity

ragnel
 
  1  
Mon 31 May, 2010 07:50 pm
@firefly,
Such complexity!
Give me an old garden maze
To negotiate.
ragnel
 
  2  
Mon 7 Jun, 2010 10:18 pm
@ragnel,
To negotiate
A long lasting peace treaty
Is the good man's dream.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 8 Jun, 2010 05:58 am
@ragnel,
Is the good man's dream.
Dreams are full of surprises,
Come and dream with me.
ragnel
 
  2  
Tue 8 Jun, 2010 09:27 pm
@Dutchy,
Come and dream with me.
We'll sail across the desert,
Walk across the sea.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 8 Jun, 2010 10:12 pm
@ragnel,
Walk across the sea.
I bushwhack through the forest,
forging my own trail.
ragnel
 
  1  
Wed 9 Jun, 2010 06:28 am
@Dutchy,
Forging my own trail
Is surely slowing me down.
They will soon catch up!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 9 Jun, 2010 07:17 am
@ragnel,
They will soon catch up!
All shortcuts have disappeared,
screen, mind, both are blank.
firefly
 
  1  
Thu 10 Jun, 2010 10:50 am
@Dutchy,
Screen, mind, both are blank
My past wiped out, data lost,
So, who am I now?
Krumple
 
  1  
Thu 10 Jun, 2010 10:58 am
@firefly,
So, who am I now?
the past does not remember
future has forgot
ragnel
 
  1  
Thu 10 Jun, 2010 08:31 pm
@Krumple,
Future has forgot
All the sins of both our pasts.
Let's begin anew!
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 10 Jun, 2010 08:33 pm
@ragnel,
Let's begin anew
lest I need to achoo or
eschew, which is worse.
ragnel
 
  1  
Fri 11 Jun, 2010 07:41 am
@ossobuco,
Eschew - which is worse
Than facing up to the task
Of arguing back!


(phew! You threw in a touch of the Lewis Carrolls there!)
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 11 Jun, 2010 06:58 pm
@ragnel,
Of arguing back!
Defeated and hungover,
hoping for a cure.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Fri 11 Jun, 2010 09:37 pm
@Dutchy,
Hoping for a cure,
I went to see doctor
about a horse pill.
Victor Eremita
 
  2  
Fri 11 Jun, 2010 10:06 pm
I'm out of college
Major is philosophy
I work at Starbucks
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