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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ragnel
 
  2  
Fri 7 May, 2010 09:05 pm
@Dutchy,
Will soon be true life
Is replaced by fantasy;
Living in our dreams.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2010 09:32 pm
@ragnel,
Living in our dreams.
Life's endless dreams drifting by
free, but in limbo.
Mame
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2010 09:35 pm
@Dutchy,
Free, but in limbo
I hang suspended in air
On a parachute
firefly
 
  2  
Fri 7 May, 2010 09:43 pm
@Mame,
On a parachute
I glide slowly toward the earth,
Back to the real world
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2010 09:54 pm
@firefly,
Back to the real world.
Now have one request to make,
Show me you exist.
oolongteasup
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2010 02:05 am
@Dutchy,
show me you exist

a feeling so palpable

you almost touch it
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 8 May, 2010 08:38 am
@oolongteasup,
You almost touch it,
But the butterfly moved on
To kiss a larkspur
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2010 04:38 pm
@firefly,
To kiss a larkspur.
Excited by a brand new day,
happy in the sun.
spendius
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2010 05:02 pm
@Dutchy,
Happy in the sun
The daisy watched its progress.
Then closed for the night.
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 8 May, 2010 06:57 pm
@spendius,
Then, closed for the night,
The pub stood silent and dark,
No trace of life left


Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2010 07:16 pm
@firefly,
No trace of life left.
And the rest falls into place
with a simple click.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Sat 8 May, 2010 07:23 pm
@Dutchy,
With a simple click
you can access news online
and be depressed fast.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2010 07:28 pm
@ossobuco,
and be depressed fast.
Read the funnies and cartoons,
for a tonic laugh.
ragnel
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2010 12:17 am
@Dutchy,
For a tonic, laugh
at children playing grown-ups.
They are quite silly!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2010 12:22 am
@ragnel,
They are quite silly.
The clowns in a big circus,
with comical face.
ragnel
 
  1  
Mon 10 May, 2010 01:45 am
@Dutchy,
With comical face
in place, masking true feelings,
I'll go to see him.
firefly
 
  2  
Mon 10 May, 2010 10:04 am
@ragnel,
I'll go to see him,
Although he may not know me,
Age has robbed his mind

ragnel
 
  1  
Mon 10 May, 2010 06:24 pm
@firefly,
Age has robbed his mind
Of all his finer feelings.
A grumpy old man!
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 10 May, 2010 09:07 pm
@ragnel,
A grumpy old man
Married a grumpy old wife,
And they never spoke
Rockhead
 
  1  
Mon 10 May, 2010 09:11 pm
@firefly,
And they never spoke
except on Sunday mornings
on the way to church.
 

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