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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
spendius
 
  1  
Mon 22 Mar, 2010 06:10 pm
@ossobuco,
Through the grassed slope
The little wick things wriggled
In between the tufts.


Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 22 Mar, 2010 06:37 pm
@spendius,
In between the tufts.
The in love couple held their hands,
smiling at the clouds.
oolongteasup
 
  1  
Mon 22 Mar, 2010 10:13 pm
@Dutchy,
Quote:
smiling at the clouds


oceans welcome waves are high

on a distant shore

firefly
 
  2  
Mon 22 Mar, 2010 11:24 pm
@oolongteasup,
On a distant shore
Are my bags the airline lost
My vacation's ruined
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 22 Mar, 2010 11:34 pm
@firefly,
My vacation's ruined.
Save a few dollars quickly,
try again next year.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Tue 23 Mar, 2010 12:33 pm
@Dutchy,
"Try again next year",
Said Springtime to the Winter
As the trees changed coats.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 23 Mar, 2010 12:45 pm
@iamsam82,
As the trees changed coats,
tulips bloomed and weeds began
their run to cover.
spendius
 
  1  
Tue 23 Mar, 2010 02:41 pm
@ossobuco,
Their run to cover,
As sure of foot as swift, left
Panting dogs confused.
0 Replies
 
Francis
 
  3  
Tue 23 Mar, 2010 02:50 pm
Panting dogs confused
Looking at the quick road runners
Fading in the distance
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 23 Mar, 2010 04:26 pm
@Francis,
Fading in the distance.
Blowing , a mere gentle breeze
with seasons passing.
iamsam82
 
  2  
Tue 23 Mar, 2010 04:58 pm
@Dutchy,
With seasons passing,
I too have not time to dream -
Just the slip downstream.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 03:48 pm
@iamsam82,
Just the slip downstream.
Heading towards a distant shore,
faster than I’d like.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 03:56 pm
@Dutchy,
Faster than I'd like
the years zip by, racing their
way to the last slope.
spendius
 
  2  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 04:02 pm
@ossobuco,
Way to the last slope
Is first right, and right again,
Then left at the bar.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 04:09 pm
@spendius,
Then left at the bar
poor bloke did not want to set
foot to cold night air.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 04:14 pm
@spendius,
Foot to cold night air.
Into summer beer joy hops,
fall into the clouds.
0 Replies
 
spendius
 
  1  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 05:55 pm
@ossobuco,
Foot to cold night air
Is not the way to cure gout.
Six pints is better.
Mame
 
  2  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 08:20 pm
@spendius,
Six pints is better
than five, don't you agree, man?
Obviously, yeah!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 24 Mar, 2010 09:06 pm
@Mame,
Obviously, yeah!.
The well endowned barmaid said,
one more coming up.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 25 Mar, 2010 02:30 pm
@Dutchy,
One more coming up
Through the thawing earth: a bloom,
Kissed from sleep by Spring.
0 Replies
 
 

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