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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 6 Mar, 2010 04:16 pm
@Rockhead,
new journeys begin
whistle of distant trains bound
for lands beyond dreams.
spendius
 
  1  
Sat 6 Mar, 2010 06:36 pm
@Dutchy,
For lands beyond dreams
I inhale the pipe of peace.
And stare at the wall.
0 Replies
 
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 6 Mar, 2010 07:07 pm
And stare at the wall,
she thought. Wait, the pitted wall
needs Spackle compound.
ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 09:49 am
@ossobuco,
Needs spackle compound
needs subfloor, needs carpeting,
needs a whole new life.
McTag
 
  1  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 02:11 pm
@ehBeth,

needs a whole new life
A Norwegian Blue, you say?
Pull the other one.
Rockhead
 
  2  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 02:16 pm
@McTag,
Pull the other one
oh crap, not that one. now what?
duck before it blows.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 02:30 pm
@Rockhead,
duck before it blows.
I see the rivers empty
filling distant lakes.

ehBeth
 
  3  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 02:52 pm
@Dutchy,
Filling distant lakes
with wild flaps and frenzied calls
the geese greet spring now.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 03:16 pm
@ehBeth,
the geese greet spring now.
Brilliant sunshine floods our eyes,
spring has arrived.
Tai Chi
 
  2  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 03:19 pm
@Dutchy,
Spring has arrived.
Would someone please tell the snow?
Enough already!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 7 Mar, 2010 03:53 pm
@Tai Chi,
Enough already!
Keep falling, please, and if you
don’t mind, stay till May. Laughing
0 Replies
 
sullyfish6
 
  1  
Mon 8 Mar, 2010 09:47 am
Don’t mind, stay till May
or bloom early if you want
It's all up to you.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 8 Mar, 2010 10:31 am
@sullyfish6,
It's all up to you:
buckle that shoe and get
on with the next show.
Intrepid
 
  2  
Mon 8 Mar, 2010 02:45 pm
@ossobuco,
On with the next show.
The miracle of spring blooms
bursting from the ground.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 8 Mar, 2010 03:49 pm
@Intrepid,
bursting from the ground,
a fountain of fresh cold water,
reviving the plants.
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 13 Mar, 2010 01:00 pm
@Dutchy,
Reviving the plants
Calls for some fertilizer,
To nourish the roots
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 13 Mar, 2010 04:32 pm
@firefly,
To nourish the roots.
Morning light begins our day
a breeze softly blows .
spendius
 
  1  
Sat 13 Mar, 2010 06:36 pm
@Dutchy,
A breeze softly blows
Lifting the skirts of the girls
Leaning over walls.
Mame
 
  2  
Sat 13 Mar, 2010 08:19 pm
@spendius,
Leaning over the walls
Were perverts and pedophiles
Those girls are ten!
Dutchy
 
  2  
Sat 13 Mar, 2010 09:49 pm
@Mame,
Those girl are ten!
We shall pickle them then until
they're ready to pick.
 

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