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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Mame
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 04:27 pm
@Mame,
Or were you amused
by beer and haiku pairings
which you seem to love
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 04:50 pm
@Mame,
which you seem to love
I am on top of the world,
with a drink in hand.
Tai Chi
 
  2  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 04:53 pm
@Dutchy,
With a drink in hand
(seems beer is good for my bones)
A pitcher of health!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 07:12 pm
@Tai Chi,
A pitcher of health.
Like watching the earth open,
one thought at a time
Tai Chi
 
  2  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 07:34 pm
@Dutchy,
One thought at a time
is all I can manage now
Brain quite untidy
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 07:57 pm
@Tai Chi,
Brain quite untidy
muddled by thoughts of past friends
and moonlit keggers.
Mame
 
  2  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:00 pm
@tsarstepan,
And moonlit keggers
Boy, we're really into beer!
Get off this topic!!! (lol)
Tai Chi
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:03 pm
@Mame,
Get off this topic!!
And find something more refined
Single estate tea?
0 Replies
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:04 pm
@Mame,
Get off this topic.
Your wish is my command mame,
how about romance? Wink
lmur
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:06 pm
@Dutchy,
how about romance?
quotheth the Dutch-stralian.
I'm not that way inclined.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:11 pm
@lmur,
I'm not that way inclined -
more of a slope to the left with
the river bend below
Tai Chi
 
  1  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:15 pm
@ossobuco,
River bend below
Lonely tow'ring cliffs above
Too tempting to jump
ossobuco
 
  2  
Tue 23 Feb, 2010 08:19 pm
@Tai Chi,
Too tempting to jump,
fall, dizzy with vertigo,
needs protective fence
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 04:11 pm
@ossobuco,
Needs protective fence.
To keep a wandering mind
from straying to far.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 04:17 pm
@Dutchy,
From straying too far,
lambs had to rush and jump to
to get back to flock
iamsam82
 
  2  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 04:31 pm
@ossobuco,
To get back to flock,
The lamb long wandered the fields -
And found but himself.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 05:13 pm
@iamsam82,
ossobuco? Your haiku is quite cute. It would make an excellent sample poem to illustrate to children what a haiku is.


iamsam? Your haiku is particularly zen! Great followup!

And found but himself?
Which was quite befuddling as
he was not looking.

ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 05:22 pm
@tsarstepan,
Nuthin' cuter than frolicking lambs..
0 Replies
 
McTag
 
  1  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 05:29 pm
@tsarstepan,

He was not looking
But nevertheless he found
That thing he had lost
0 Replies
 
sullyfish6
 
  2  
Thu 25 Feb, 2010 07:13 pm
That thing which he lost
Never to regain again
Love long lost today
 

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