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Neverending Haiku chain

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tsarstepan
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jan, 2010 11:53 pm
@ossobuco,
Freezer. Close the door
upon the unfriendly stars
that hide in the sky.
ehBeth
 
  2  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 11:44 am
@tsarstepan,
That hide in the sky
attitude is keeping you
from feeling the pain.
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iamsam82
 
  3  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 11:44 am
@tsarstepan,
That hide in the sky,
Where, secreted with spy glass,
I'm angelwatching.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 02:48 pm
@iamsam82,
I'm angelwatching.
I am turning out the light,
and going to sleep.
McTag
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 03:30 pm
@Dutchy,

And going to sleep?
As if it were that easy......
The Bad Man's coming.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 03:59 pm
@McTag,
The bad man's coming,
riding his pale horse slowly
through the morning fog.
Rockhead
 
  3  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 04:38 pm
@ossobuco,
through the morning fog.
nothing permeates or grows
silencing the bog
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jan, 2010 05:11 pm
@Rockhead,
silencing the bog.
Walking around in circles,
going nowhere fast.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Mon 4 Jan, 2010 04:57 pm
@Dutchy,
Going nowhere fast
And still arriving too late
With minutes to spare.
ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 4 Jan, 2010 05:10 pm
@iamsam82,
With minutes to spare
the trench coated man leapt on
to the subway car.
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tsarstepan
 
  1  
Mon 4 Jan, 2010 05:11 pm
@iamsam82,
Quote:
That hide in the sky
attitude is keeping you
from feeling the pain.

EB! That's a keeper of a haiku! Great thought provoking stuff there!

With minutes to spare
the owl shanghais the frail mouse
a repast at dawn
ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 4 Jan, 2010 05:15 pm
@tsarstepan,
<Yeh. I still participate in this thread after many years because once in a while amidst our typing efforts come a few lines that are really moving, expressive, beautiful, or all three. Oh, and sometimes humor happens, even wit.>
iamsam82
 
  2  
Wed 6 Jan, 2010 05:10 pm
@tsarstepan,
A repast at dawn
With me and a reflection
In a cold teacup.
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iamsam82
 
  1  
Wed 6 Jan, 2010 05:11 pm
@ossobuco,
Has anyone considered Guinness (the record people, not the stout)? This haiku/post has to be some kind of record.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Wed 13 Jan, 2010 10:03 pm
@iamsam82,
I doubt this thread even approaches a record considering it's a relatively famous internet meme/style word game.

In a cold teacup,
the spoiled cream eddies like
sad, neglected ghosts
Rockhead
 
  2  
Wed 13 Jan, 2010 10:07 pm
@tsarstepan,
sad, neglected ghosts
watching silently over
unsuspecting hosts
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Wed 13 Jan, 2010 10:32 pm
@Rockhead,
Unsuspecting hosts
serving crumbs of cheese and bread
to a clan of mice.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 13 Jan, 2010 11:03 pm
@tsarstepan,
to a clan of mice.
I am a wild, crazy cat
give me a break, man.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jan, 2010 12:00 pm
@Dutchy,
"Give me a break, man!"
"Sure!" said Tony, "Heart and knees.
Dough... or wife and limbs."
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Fri 15 Jan, 2010 01:32 pm
@iamsam82,
Dough... or wife and limbs
the baker's wandering mind
danced the surreal trip.
 

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