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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ehBeth
 
  2  
Sun 29 Mar, 2009 01:16 pm
@Dutchy,
Early, all to bed,
mother and father relax
over chardonnay.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 29 Mar, 2009 08:46 pm
@ehBeth,
over chardonnay,
many a story is told,
to gladden the hearts.
Equus
 
  1  
Mon 30 Mar, 2009 02:49 pm
@Dutchy,
To gladden the hearts,
Let's rewrite movie "Bambi"
To let mother live
patiodog
 
  1  
Mon 30 Mar, 2009 05:49 pm
@Equus,
To let mother live
Is to sentence dad to die
Slowly, by nagging
ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 30 Mar, 2009 05:52 pm
@patiodog,
(snort)

Slowly, by nagging,
day after day after day,
she wore him down too.
lmur
 
  1  
Mon 30 Mar, 2009 05:55 pm
@ossobuco,
She wore him. Down too.
Sometimes leather, but mainly
Feathers. She was strange.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 30 Mar, 2009 06:02 pm
@lmur,
Feathers. She was strange.
A woman with a cold heart,
albeit warm in bed.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 30 Mar, 2009 08:43 pm
@Dutchy,
Albeit warm in bed,
the dog jumped out to go bark
at the front window.

solipsister
 
  1  
Wed 1 Apr, 2009 01:00 am
@ossobuco,
at the front window
when fruitful play is over
summer boughs so low
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 1 Apr, 2009 03:24 am
@solipsister,
summer boughs so low
can't find the girl of my dreams,
where is my lovely?
solipsister
 
  1  
Wed 1 Apr, 2009 03:44 am
@Dutchy,
where is my lovely
calliope a musing
fairground poetry
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 1 Apr, 2009 03:53 am
@solipsister,
fairground poetry,
sounds like music to my ears,
carry on my dear.
ehBeth
 
  2  
Sat 25 Apr, 2009 05:14 pm
@Dutchy,
Carry on my dear,
friends and family gather round,
we sing together.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 25 Apr, 2009 07:21 pm
@ehBeth,
we sing together,
maybe out of tune perhaps,
but oh so cosy.
solipsister
 
  2  
Wed 29 Apr, 2009 08:43 pm
@Dutchy,
but oh so cosy

until time comes falling to

winter's cold regret
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 29 Apr, 2009 09:43 pm
@solipsister,
winter's cold regret
not really my cup of tea
warmth is what I like.
solipsister
 
  2  
Wed 6 May, 2009 11:19 pm
@Dutchy,
warmth is what i like
as i look into the sky
is it you or i
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 7 May, 2009 03:47 am
@solipsister,
Is it you or I,
May I suggest it is you,
Admired from afar.
patiodog
 
  2  
Thu 7 May, 2009 05:27 am
@Dutchy,
Admired from afar
Warts, cracks, scars in distance hid
Loathed when close at hand
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 7 May, 2009 04:55 pm
@patiodog,
Loathed when close at hand.
Admiration is good,
Cannot be to much.
 

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