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hamburger
 
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Reply Mon 1 Sep, 2008 06:39 pm
@Equus,
draped with plastic fruit
the table stood there - alone
looking for a friend
firefly
 
  2  
Reply Tue 2 Sep, 2008 07:30 am
@hamburger,
Looking for a friend?
You have come to the right place,
A2K, that is
hamburger
 
  1  
Reply Tue 2 Sep, 2008 02:00 pm
@firefly,
a2k that is
the way to communicate
on earth and in space
0 Replies
 
patiodog
 
  2  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 06:43 am
on earth and in space
an atmosphere suspended
holds a trillion farts
ossobuco
 
  2  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 11:24 am
@patiodog,
Holds a trillion farts,
he said, staring up through the
oculus at night.

hamburger
 
  3  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 02:46 pm
@ossobuco,
oculus at night
shows stars and moon shine brightly
tomorrow sunshine
patiodog
 
  2  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 04:48 pm
@hamburger,
tomorrow sunshine
but never sunshine today
damn'd bloody England
alex240101
 
  1  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 04:48 pm
@hamburger,
tomorrow sunshine
a daily dose
phosphene in my eyes
0 Replies
 
hamburger
 
  2  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 07:38 pm
@patiodog,
damn'd bloody england
is the jewel in the crown
canada : forests
Equus
 
  2  
Reply Wed 3 Sep, 2008 08:32 pm
@hamburger,
Canada: forests
Greenland: vast blue-white glaciers
US: McDonald's
firefly
 
  3  
Reply Thu 4 Sep, 2008 05:23 am
@Equus,
US: McDonald's,
Monument to junk fast food,
Poisoning the world
Equus
 
  2  
Reply Thu 4 Sep, 2008 03:23 pm
@firefly,
Poisoning the world,
Aliens making the Earth
More like their planet
ehBeth
 
  2  
Reply Thu 4 Sep, 2008 03:56 pm
@Equus,
More like their planet

than the one they'd just come from,

Martians looked at Earth.
hamburger
 
  2  
Reply Thu 4 Sep, 2008 05:02 pm
@ehBeth,
martians looked at earth
they did not like what they saw
let us stay on mars
patiodog
 
  2  
Reply Thu 4 Sep, 2008 06:27 pm
@hamburger,
Let us stay on Mars
Get a room at the Hilton
On Lowell's canals
hamburger
 
  2  
Reply Fri 5 Sep, 2008 05:00 pm
@patiodog,
on lowell's canal
known as PAWTUCKET canal
it's where good friends meet
patiodog
 
  2  
Reply Fri 5 Sep, 2008 06:05 pm
@hamburger,
It's where good friends meet
It's where old foes reconcile
Six feet underground
ossobuco
 
  3  
Reply Fri 5 Sep, 2008 06:10 pm
@patiodog,
Six feet underground
lies the river returning
to meet with the Styx.
hamburger
 
  2  
Reply Fri 5 Sep, 2008 06:25 pm
@ossobuco,
to meet with the styx
to meet with the underworld
to meet the unknown
firefly
 
  3  
Reply Fri 5 Sep, 2008 06:30 pm
@hamburger,
To meet the unknown,
Better have an open mind
And an exit plan
 

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