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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
willow tl
 
  1  
Thu 8 Apr, 2004 10:35 pm
But hell, I love them!
those jalepeno peppers
green the hue of fire!
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 8 Apr, 2004 10:50 pm
Green the hue of fire
Where Willow lives; what colour
Is the shining sea?
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solar
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 04:04 am
Is the shining sea?
Is the sky robin egg blue?
Am I what I seem?
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 04:38 am
Am I what I seem?
A shining sun in a square?
Am I a person?
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willow tl
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 10:47 am
Am I a person?
that is colorful and bright?
Only my friends care.
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solar
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 02:58 pm
Only my friends care.
And how dear they are to me.
Storing up good times.
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 05:41 pm
Storing up good times
To entertain me in my
Times of great boredom.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 08:06 pm
Times of great boredom,
Sitting at work and wishing
To be somewhere else.
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 09:31 pm
To be somewhere else,
Somewhere I'd be happier--
With you. Anywhere.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 09:35 pm
With you. Anywhere
Except a dull dark locale
No trees, just bare rock.
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 09:44 pm
No trees, just bare rock,
Covers the landscape of the
Moon. Oh how boring!
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 09:45 pm
Moon - oh how boring!
I expected to see stars
And the Northern Lights.
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 09:50 pm
And the Northern Lights,
Just like the brilliant sunsets
Are magnificent.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 09:51 pm
Are magnificent
People in wonderful clothes
Seeing you today?
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 10:07 pm
Seeing you today
All decked out in splendid clothes
Makes me green with envy
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 10:15 pm
Makes me green with en-
Vy, those people who have all
I could ever want.
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 10:19 pm
*Oops! I didn't realize that line was six syllables.* Embarrassed

I could ever want,
Yet I might never receive.
I'll keep on wanting.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 10:33 pm
I'll keep on wanting
But I know that happiness
Lies in not wanting.
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Exception
 
  1  
Fri 9 Apr, 2004 10:53 pm
Lies in not; wanting
To play outside, the kitten
Paws at the closed door.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 10 Apr, 2004 12:57 am
Paws at the closed door -
While I'm eating my dinner
I don't want the dog.
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