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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 16 Mar, 2004 11:39 am
A ship at anchor
I board with trepidation
Dramamine in hand
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solar
 
  1  
Tue 16 Mar, 2004 04:59 pm
Dramamine in hand
My eyes survey the sailors.
Contentment fills me.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Tue 16 Mar, 2004 07:41 pm
Contentment fills me,
dogs snore, the dryer buzzes,
laundry's nearly done.
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solar
 
  1  
Tue 16 Mar, 2004 07:43 pm
laundry's nearly done.
time for tea and to relax
ice cream anyone?
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Ceili
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 02:46 am
Ice cream anyone
Get it before it melts
Watch Dali create
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solar
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 06:15 am
Watch Dali create.
Experience the colours.
Reflections of you.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 10:53 am
Reflections of you
As I look in my mirror
I turn in surprise!
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solar
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 10:58 am
I turn in surprise!
I've lost my identity.
I'm you and your me.
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 11:09 am
I'm you and you're me
The eggman and the walrus
Together again
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Dax
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 11:17 am
sins lead to jail time
and friendships lost, hearts broken.
It's not wroth it guys.
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 11:20 am
Great Dax, and welcome to A2K. In this thread you begin your haiku with the last line of the previous one!

So the next haiku should start with:

Together again
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solar
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 11:48 am
Hi Dax Very Happy Welcome!!!!
i was a newbie on Friday!
I love it here.

In this game we take the last line of the previous haiku and make that the first line of the next one. I'm still not sure if there are supposed to be connected by subject somewhow.
enjoy!

I'm you and you're me
The eggman and the walrus
Together again

(I laughed at that one, and now I can't get the tune out of my head!)

Together again.
After all those miles apart.
reunion of friends
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 04:12 pm
Together again
You gave Mommy quite a scare
Come give me a hug
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willow tl
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 04:14 pm
Come give me a hug
Squeeze me tight and whisper low
"I love you silly!"
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 06:01 pm
I love you, silly
hats, furry sweaters, pleated
pants and all that jazz.
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 07:03 pm
pants and all that jazz
Zoot suits and swingtime music
Harlem Renaissance
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willow tl
 
  1  
Wed 17 Mar, 2004 07:08 pm
Harlem Renaissance
poetry, music, nightlife.
A new beginning.
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Thu 18 Mar, 2004 08:09 am
A new beginning--
Pure, undeterred-- is rising
From the cold ashes.



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solar
 
  1  
Thu 18 Mar, 2004 04:41 pm
From the cold ashes
ants march carrying morsels
remnants of dinner.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Thu 18 Mar, 2004 05:54 pm
Remnants of dinner,
a dog's paradise, lamb and
carrots and pasta.
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