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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Dec, 2005 01:55 am
While Mem sips her tea,
The peacocks steal the lentils
Spread out in the sun.
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lezzles
 
  1  
Fri 9 Dec, 2005 02:01 am
Spread out in the sun
The bodies lie on the beach
Cells burning away.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 9 Dec, 2005 02:02 am
Cells burning away
Reveal the bare bones of the
Naked sunbathers
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Mathos
 
  1  
Fri 9 Dec, 2005 03:43 pm
Naked sunbathers
On a frosty winters day
They need help.
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lezzles
 
  1  
Fri 9 Dec, 2005 07:23 pm
They need help, do they?
Silly, but they do know how
to count up to five.

:wink:
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 11 Dec, 2005 01:08 pm
To count up to five
Can't we have a simple jive
Before it starts to snow?
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 11 Dec, 2005 08:50 pm
To count up to five
Is essential. I therefore
Ignore some people.
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lezzles
 
  1  
Mon 12 Dec, 2005 12:38 am
Ignore some people.
Could it be the only way
To keep one serene?
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sephirothnz23
 
  1  
Mon 12 Dec, 2005 04:15 am
To keep one serene?
You must be joking
Because he is laughing
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lezzles
 
  1  
Mon 12 Dec, 2005 06:30 am
Because he's laughing
The world's a sunnier place.
Shall we laugh with him?



Hi sephiroth!

Welcome to the forum. I see you've been a busy little bee today. Hope you enjoy the threads as much as I do. Handy hint - go to page 1 on each thread and familiarise yourself with the rules of each game - sometimes its hard to see what's going on and it may take a few tries before you get the hang of it. Stick with it and have fun. Very Happy
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Mathos
 
  1  
Mon 12 Dec, 2005 09:06 am
Shall we laugh with him
Until we all breakdown and cry
Or simply let it flow?
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Mon 12 Dec, 2005 06:41 pm
Simply let it flow

over you. Like sunshine in

a quiet landscape.
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sephirothnz23
 
  1  
Mon 12 Dec, 2005 07:10 pm
a quiet landscape
with rolling hills
and undualting scenery
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Tue 13 Dec, 2005 08:14 pm
hi sephiroth Very Happy
we're trying to stick to the basic 5-7-5 haiku pattern for the purpose of this thread <we've got some other variants around here somewhere>

so, with a modification


Scenery moves me,

makes me consider options

vetoed in the past.
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 13 Dec, 2005 10:40 pm
Vetoed in the past,
The new laws enable us
To drink when we like.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Wed 14 Dec, 2005 10:04 am
To drink when we like
Even through the long curfew
It must be nectar
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 14 Dec, 2005 08:03 pm
It must be nectar
But not of the gods, just a
Stain on his new tie
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 14 Dec, 2005 09:58 pm
Stain on his new tie
Blended in with the pattern
No one will notice
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lezzles
 
  1  
Thu 15 Dec, 2005 12:51 am
No one will notice
If I simply disappear.
"Who?" they will all say.
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Bloods Vs Crips
 
  1  
Thu 15 Dec, 2005 12:56 am
"Who?" they will all say,
Its me the moderator,
You got a problem?
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