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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 4 Aug, 2005 06:09 pm
Let the dice decide:
there are so many combos
of points of view now.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 05:51 am
Of points of view now
I prefer the London Eye.
All London, spread out.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 12:23 pm
All London, spread out
Like a feast to devour
I will glut myself
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 01:26 pm
I will glut myself
Now on Toulouse sausages
And new potatoes.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 01:32 pm
And new potatoes
Finally ending her list
Husband long turned deaf
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proudlybelizean
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:07 pm
husband long turned deaf
she enlisted for sign language
on to new ventures she went
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:08 pm
Husband long turned deaf
ear toward her pleas for dinner
out on her birthday.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:12 pm
Proudly, it's a 5-7-5 syllable haiku...


On to new ventures
she went merrily downstream,
looking for small fish,
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proudlybelizean
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:14 pm
looking for small fish
to fry in a dry frying pan
when up came the storm
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:17 pm
When up came the storm,
Bellowing in my ear, and
Raining swords and spears.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:21 pm
Raining swords and spears
came down the clouds full of cats
and puppy dog's tails.
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proudlybelizean
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:23 pm
and puppy dogs' tails
and spotted and frail
bring that hammer, lets nail
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:47 pm
5 7 5


Bring that hammer, let's
nail the tarp to the table
and bring chips and dip.
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Chai
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:47 pm
bring that hammer
a new home for us to make
warm against winter
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proudlybelizean
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 02:49 pm
warm against winter
the fire heart kept them
waiting to exhale
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 03:02 pm
Waiting to exhale
until my dear mother left
poor smoke-filled, tight lungs.
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proudlybelizean
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 03:05 pm
poor smoke-filled, tight lungs
will be the death of me
alas! we must die of something...
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Chai
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 03:13 pm
proudly belizean
the last line is supposed to have only 5 syllables...

Alas we must die
Gaudeamus Igitur
Dum spiro spero
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 05:11 pm
Dumb Spiro Spero

trod on my Enzo platforms.

I can not forgive.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 5 Aug, 2005 05:15 pm
What's with many people not doing 5-7-5 (syllables)? Did I miss a rules change?
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