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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
aidan
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jul, 2005 07:26 pm
Or just REALLY light?!
Not if you rolled out the dough
Don't have "light" in you.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jul, 2005 09:40 pm
Don't have light in you?

Check the matches. Are they duds,

Or is it too damp?
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littlek
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jul, 2005 09:47 pm
Or is it too Damp?
Cricket thought before ans'ring
"The Dew is just right."
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Wed 20 Jul, 2005 10:52 pm
The dew is just right
for the melancholy hour,
he said, sadly.
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Thu 21 Jul, 2005 04:45 pm
he said sadly:
'yesterday's follies are the
stuff of deep regret.'
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kirsten
 
  1  
Thu 21 Jul, 2005 07:35 pm
stuff of deep regret
Should I have gotten black shoes
Instead of the red?
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aidan
 
  1  
Thu 21 Jul, 2005 11:35 pm
Instead of red
I chose the muted purple-
like bruises healing.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 06:38 am
Like bruises healing
The memories of you fade
And the pain recedes
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 06:40 am
And the pain recedes
Into the middle distance
Neither here nor there.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 06:45 am
Neither here nor there
I am really at loose ends
Can you help me out?
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 06:47 am
Can you help me out?
Out of what? You must tell me.
How am I to know?
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 06:53 am
How am I to know
If I have made the right choice
Have I missed something?
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 06:55 am
Have I missed something?
Probably not important.
All just pettiness. Laughing
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 12:02 pm
All just pettiness,
the fight between you and me.
Let's just forget it.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 12:56 pm
Let's just forget it -
call the whole thing off - so we
can go out dancing.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 01:25 pm
Can we go dancing?
I'd love to trip the ol' light
fantastic with you.

(Mind my "edit", osso?)
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 02:56 pm
Never mind it, devries..
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 02:58 pm
Fantastic with you
having the flu and seeing
stars on the ceiling!
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 03:33 pm
stars on this ceiling
we glide upon together
in a seamless dance
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 22 Jul, 2005 04:07 pm
in a seamless dance
our heartbeats the metronome
we found our passion
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