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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 04:27 am
Throw my cares away
Deep into the nether lands
Alas, they return
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theollady
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 05:30 am
Alas, they return
Drops keep falling on my head
Much soil erosion
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 06:17 am
Much soil erosion
Hillsides stripped for our pleasures
Man against nature
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 08:14 am
Man againt nature -
That shouldn't happen, we must
Both work together.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 08:33 am
Both work together
Man with nature and woman
Together we shine
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theollady
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 08:35 am
Together we shine
We hope the sun will join in
And burn clouds away
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 10:03 am
And burn clouds away,
she said, looking up at the
thunderheads massing.
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Equus
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 10:23 am
Thunderheads massing-
Never been struck by lightning:
Non-conductive head?
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 10:58 am
Non-conductive head?
Don't you see my shiny hat?
It's a lightening rod.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 11:11 am
It's a lightening rod,
you silly sot, when you stand
on a green alone!
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 11:13 am
It's a lightening rod
Oops, is that six syllables?
But, not to worry



:-)
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 11:15 am
Laughing Laughing Okay smarty pants - I don't know about you, but I say light-ning - not light-en-ing.

But not to worry.
Sit back, relax, take it easy-
It's the only way.
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theollady
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 12:49 pm
It's the only way
Through the foot path by the brook
And stop to dip toes
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 02:06 pm
and stop to dip toes
break the surface and alter
the life of the stream
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firefly
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 02:38 pm
The life of the stream
Is destroyed by pollution
Look at the salmon!
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 02:42 pm
Look at the salmon
Served with anchovy coulis,
Cherry tomatoes!
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 02:47 pm
cherry tomatoes
cheery cherubs picked and popped
into my big mouth
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 03:05 pm
Into my big mouth
That is where my foot has gone
But, I can find it.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 03:37 pm
But I can find it
Then with one voice alone,
I shout eureka
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 12 Jul, 2005 04:21 pm
I shout eureka!
And take pride in all I see
California's home
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