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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:11 am
It is most simple
He never dances well either
Boogies great though!
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:14 am
Boogies great though!
Something to be said for that!
What music for you?
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:15 am
What music for you
Depends on the mood
Techno is ok
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:18 am
Techno is okay?
Repetitive and boring!
Generation gap?
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:24 am
Generation gap?
I don't really think so
I enjoy reality.
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:27 am
I enjoy reality-
As do I - but are they same?
What is your context?
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:29 am
What is your context,
Broad, muscular ruggedly handsome
Fun to be with
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:31 am
Fun to be with-
Rest sounds good - but that is key
At least in my mind.
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Mathos
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 10:34 am
-At least in your mind
Surely the new betterment
Is advantageous
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firefly
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 11:28 am
Is advantageous
You finally got it right
Correct syllables!
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 11:30 am
Correct syllables
An authentic haiku make
Really not that hard!
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 11:56 am
Really not that hard

Is cricket to understand.

You just soak it up.
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:01 pm
You just soak it up-
Like the wonderful sunshine
That warmed me today.
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:07 pm
That warmed me today

In England's green and pleasant.

Am I not lucky?
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:08 pm
Am I not lucky?
Am I not lucky as well?
I love where I live.
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:22 pm
I love where I live

And don't intend to leave it.

Voluntarily.
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:24 pm
Voluntarily?
How could it be otherwise?
Deportation looms?
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:36 pm
Deportation looms.

For unfortunate people.

And I am not one.
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aidan
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:38 pm
And I am not one
who would leave this home lightly-
it brings me great peace.
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spendius
 
  1  
Sun 3 Jul, 2005 12:45 pm
It brings me great peace.

Let's hope that lasts a long time

If you want it to.
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