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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 03:06 pm
Just go with it - yes?
Or, should it be no. Oh my
Whatever to do
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 03:09 pm
Whatever to do?
You have to do what you feel.
What are you feeling?
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 04:10 pm
What are you feeling?
Is there some fear in your heart?
Are you embarrassed?
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 04:13 pm
Are you embarrassed?
Embarrassed of what I ask?
Life's too short for shame.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 04:32 pm
Life's too short for shame?
Some cut off women's noses
If they've shamed the men.
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 04:46 pm
If they've shamed the men?
Talk of cutting off noses?
What is that about?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 08:42 pm
What is that about?
Can you believe what some do?
Strange customs abound!
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 08:55 pm
Strange customs abound!
Cut off a nose to spite what?
Smell roses no more
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 09:01 pm
Smell roses no more ...
what a sad thought to think, or
not to be at all.
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bombom
 
  1  
Fri 1 Jul, 2005 09:34 pm
not to be at all...
have faceless identity
Bourne Identity?
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 01:23 am
Bourne Identity
I saw on a plane in half
Sleep, not the best time.
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 04:26 am
Sleep, not the best time
To do very much thinking
Except in your dreams
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aidan
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 11:16 am
Except in your dreams
Real life will always intrude
Better make it good.
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 11:35 am
Better make it good
You really goofed up this time
So, what's your excuse?
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aidan
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 11:37 am
So what's your excuse-
Mea culpa - I have none.
Will you still forgive?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 12:13 pm
Bourne Identity
interesting metaphor -
anonymty
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 12:18 pm
Dang it, "wrong page, dev!"
(I kinda liked that one too)

Will you still forgive
me for what I've done? It was
a simple mistake
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aidan
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 12:22 pm
A simple mistake
Is easily forgiven.
You can rest easy.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 12:57 pm
You can rest easy
in the knowledge that all is
forgiven. It's true.
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Sat 2 Jul, 2005 03:41 pm
Forgiven; it's true
freedom from debt will help build
a strong Africa.

Live8 Rocks!
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