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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
aidan
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 04:39 am
Let's talk of people.
With character traits I love-
kind, gentle, funny.
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 04:45 am
Kind, gentle, funny,
Light-hearted, intelligent,
Attractive, chatty.
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 04:47 am
Attractive chatty
That girl could talk your ear off-
But listened as well.
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firefly
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 05:51 am
But listened as well
As a friend possibly could
He was my solace
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 06:22 am
He was my solace
My port in a raging storm
With his quiet strength.
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 06:25 am
With his quiet strength
Superman moved the mountain
And saved the children.
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 06:27 am
And saved the children
How could he do otherwise?
Shouldn't that come first?
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Equus
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 09:47 am
"Shouldn't that come first?"
"Shut up, I know what to do:
Cart before the horse."
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 10:35 am
Cart before the horse,
She said, and she put her heart
Before her course. Fool!
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devriesj
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 11:15 am
Before her course, fool
forgot to study and that
was her worst downfall.
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 11:21 am
Was her worst downfall
Forgetting to study or
Leaving that fine man?
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 02:14 pm
Leaving that fine man?
Such was Mama's reaction
Little did she know...
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firefly
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 02:37 pm
Little did she know
That behind his big blue eyes
Lurked a real bastard
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spendius
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 02:55 pm
Lurked a real bastard

Who could sweet talk a stone post

And smile nice and neat
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 04:07 pm
And smile nice and neat,
Speak when spoken to, curtsey
When addressing queens.
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spendius
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 05:01 pm
When addressing Queens ( "queens? Cor!)

I lower my tone of voice

And my knees wobble.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 06:30 pm
And my knees wobble
when he looks at me that way.
Where is a sofa....... bed?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 08:15 pm
Where is a sofa?
I feel so funny - think I
need ... psychiatrist!
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 28 Jun, 2005 08:22 pm
oops, I admit to six syllables. So sorry.


Need.... psychiatrist.
Again, I dialed a number
and got the plumber.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 29 Jun, 2005 02:35 am
And got the plumber
On a weekend? Miracle!
Him up there loves ya!
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