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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Equus
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 11:43 am
Lies to drive us home:
"Sorry, I'm washing my hair"
Women won't date me.
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partyfiend
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 12:15 pm
Women won't date me.
Elevator chat-up lines.
I follow them home.

(not really!)
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 12:23 pm
I follow them home.
Imagine their shocked surprise
When they see my face.
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partyfiend
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 12:32 pm
When they see my face
They struggle to remain calm
Pandemonium!
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 12:38 pm
Pandemonium!
Reigning as never before-
Like kings on their thrones.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 03:31 pm
Like kings on their thrones
The nesting ospreys look down
From their lofty perch
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 03:39 pm
From their lofty perch
as if floating among clouds
their views are enhanced.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 03:41 pm
Their views are enhanced
By the night vision goggles
Creepy, peepy toms
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 03:50 pm
Creepy, peepy toms
breathing raggedly under
the dark cloak of night.



Oh, and thanks for the compliment a while back Aidan. :wink:
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Mathos
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 04:06 pm
The dark cloak of night
enveloping stars shiny and bright
Will it be tonight?
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 04:08 pm
The dark cloak of night
Like a black, velvet blanket
Covers all our sins.


You're welcome Shazzer.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 04:14 pm
Covers all our sins
with a blanket of white snow.
We see them no more.
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aidan
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 04:18 pm
We see them no more.
Nor hear, nor smell, nor taste them.
They have disappeared.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 04:29 pm
They have disappeared,
those little green men. I thought
I was gone crazy!
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 04:56 pm
I was gone crazy
they told me the fight was lost
demons freed within
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bombom
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 05:09 pm
demons freed within
What would our dark side reveal,?
Would you let it be?
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spendius
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 05:19 pm
Would you let it be?

Is it me you're talking to?

Do I have a choice?
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bombom
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 05:59 pm
Do I have a choice?
to be or not to be, what
would you rather choose?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 07:10 pm
Would you rather choose
where we go to dinner? It
makes no diff' to me.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Tue 21 Jun, 2005 09:16 pm
Lies to drive us home
one more time again, the drive
home when all lurch south.
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