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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 12:22 pm
I'd rather just talk
To my friends over a meal
Than go to a show.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 02:36 pm
Then go to a show
after a nice dinner out
would be just heaven.

(I know, I changed it...)
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spendius
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 02:57 pm
would be just heaven

To be all alone with you.

You know who I mean?
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 03:15 pm
You know who I mean?
The one with the attitude?
Got him in my sights
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 03:20 pm
Got him in my sights
now all I have to do is
choose to let it fly.
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spendius
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 03:20 pm
Got him in my sights.

By golly! by gum! by jingo!

Not poor little me?
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Shazzer
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 03:28 pm
Not poor little me,
a weak haiku that got dissed
by some faster hands.

(Meaning mine of course. :wink: )
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 04:11 pm
By some faster hands
He was betrayed, strung up
And later buried.
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 04:46 pm
And later buried
amid dreams I'd forgotten
I found love waiting.
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spendius
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 05:27 pm
I found love waiting.

And watching and biding time.

Then I was done for.
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 05:56 pm
Then I was done for
Caught in another dumb lie
I learned my lesson
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aidan
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 06:01 pm
I learned my lesson
Love only comes with knowledge
All other is false.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 07:26 pm
I like that one, aidan!

All other is false
when there is only one true
love you find, decide
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 08:44 pm
Love you find, decide
Love you lose was not to be
True love, you will know
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 8 Jun, 2005 09:26 pm
True love you will know
By the light that fills your soul
You will feel complete
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 9 Jun, 2005 12:31 am
You will feel complete
After union with the
Universal Soul.
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aidan
 
  1  
Thu 9 Jun, 2005 09:37 am
Universal Soul
holds answers for all mankind
Path to Nirvana.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 9 Jun, 2005 10:19 am
Path to Nirvana
How do you get there without
singer Kirt Cobain?!
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 9 Jun, 2005 10:23 am
singer Kirt Cobain?!
Remember Kirt and Courtney?
Where is Courtney now?
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 9 Jun, 2005 10:30 am
Where is Courtney now?
In and out of the drug scene
and 'singing' with Hole.
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