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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 2 Jun, 2005 06:19 pm
Nah.

Why have I gone deaf?
Could it be that years of your
yammering did it?
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spendius
 
  1  
Thu 2 Jun, 2005 06:22 pm
yammering did it

I never heard it called that

Before or after.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 2 Jun, 2005 06:27 pm
Where are you from, Spendi-?

Before or after -
which do you think looks better?
Answer carefully.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Thu 2 Jun, 2005 07:48 pm
answer carefully
you heard my proposition
don't keep me guessing
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 02:22 am
don't keep me guessing
let me know which turn to take
that will bring us home
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 02:30 am
That will bring us home
Much too late on Sunday night
Book another flight
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 02:45 am
Book another flight
To any place romantic
I want to fly high
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 03:54 am
I want to fly high

Like I want a boil up there

Where the sun don't shine.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 03:57 am
Where the sun don't shine
People are extremely pale
Like apparitions
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 04:00 am
Like apparitions
we floated in the ether
until forced to land

*you give good last lines firefly!
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 05:33 am
glad to oblige, aidan Very Happy

Until forced to land
This plane is staying aloft
Tighten your seatbelts!
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 05:34 am
devvie:-

I am from those dark regions behind the sun where new futures are created.


Like apparitions

They have floated past my eyes

Like visions and dreams.
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 05:40 am
Sorry.But what's a pip to a pomegranate.

Tighten your seatbelts!

We're going all the way till

All the wheels fall off.
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 05:50 am
Like visions and dreams
life transports us too quickly
to eternity

*sorry spendius - but I could do more with this line than the one about the wheels.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 06:04 am
"To eternity!"
Would make a wonderful toast
Shall we drink to that?
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 06:53 am
Shall we drink to that
Distant, blue, and longed for day
When we touch the sun?
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 07:04 am
When we touch the sun

Which we do every day

When skies are not grey.


aidan-It's okay.I'm pretty flexible most of the time.
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 07:15 am
When skies are not grey
my spirit lifts and sings its
soft, sweet, summer song

sorry, I know this is getting a little girly - hope you can work with it.
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spendius
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 07:33 am
soft,sweet summer song

and girls in their frocks can dance

frolicking in fields.
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aidan
 
  1  
Fri 3 Jun, 2005 07:37 am
Spendius - I'm really, really trying to rein myself in - but I can't resist - I'm just in that type of mood I guess- so here goes:

Frolicking in fields
our skins kissed by the warm sun
we sing and we shine
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