@Jonathanp219,
If I were on the committee, I would not be impressed by your letter.
The content needed to be better organized and edited, and you seemed to be making excuses for your poor grades rather than giving the committee a compelling reason to reconsider their decision. While you cite personal problems as having interfered with your studies, you are also clearly indicating that:
Quote:I now realize that college is a serious matter.
And that suggests that you were not taking it seriously before.
And, you may be telling the committee that, in fact, they made the correct decision because
Quote:This academic dismissal has been a huge wake-up call for me
.
Good. Maybe you needed a wake-up call. Maybe you needed this to happen.
Given the various stressful factors that have affected your life in the past two years, and your continuing treatment for depression, as well as your ongoing need to find some kind of employment, this might be a good time to take a break from your academic studies so you can continue to address some of those issues. In that respect, the academic dismissal might be good for you and it will also give you some time to seek and maintain some type of employment without having to worry about the additional responsibilities and stress of coursework. And, having to wait another semester or two before you can reapply for reinstatement, may allow you more time to think about just how serious you are about your education and the priority it holds in your life.
So, if you convince the Academic Committee to reconsider their decision, that will be good, and if they are unpersuaded by your letter, that might turn out to be good for you too. You can always resume your studies when you are eligible for reinstatement.
Whatever happens, I wish you well.