Spontaneous Poems

Nice one mcee, welcome back. This thread keeps on getting better, I enjoyed your piece Endy but sadly I cant write anything lately

peace, a stranger to my mind
love, what I used to know
life, monotonous city beat
waking up at midnight searching
an instant to myself is more than I need
a day alone is what my heart desires
fine, just became my everyday life
madness, at my finger tips
crash, burn, fade away
vanish, leave and never look back
caring, I wish to lack
this void I tried to fill
gets bigger with every swirl
all I am is human
same wish to have more

what's that then?

: )

hey -
it'll come flowing back... promise

thanks fya and endy your always appreciated i welcome all the views and concepts , fya you've taken great strides yourself and mgnium an endy never loose the passion if you do it will always find away back !!

nothing premeditated no planning
thinking he must be medicated
trust me just be dedicated
crptic analytic programming
soul standing
measured by the rules
taken into consideration
broken obliteration
spoken to the awoken fire burning
incineration to the incarceration of higher learning
higher calling
then shooting for the stars , hit the moon
n wonder why am i falling
toward the fish bowl
eyeballing
this solstace
can my broken hands hold this
sold this
shattered dream
for a battery
and scattered schemes
a taste for energy molecular structure
entity's find serenity in the matter there stuck ta
rupture the fathoming
assault and battering
each and every ladder ring
whereing this kind a bling
to show the souls how to blind a king
time to bring
time to receive
minds pursueing
a time to believe
climb through the eve
blind to the sleeves
slithering around my appendages
scarred from the bandage of heathens
i love these banana's as much as i love eden
i love exhaleing as much as when i breathe in
the scales of justice out weigh equality
even ,when we mix these bottoms ups and are tops leaven
would you follow me
or bottle up
and swallow me
alot a downs alot a ups
you gotta cup
and just for those
who don't trust your nose
and think it smells a little fishy
im going for a swim you wanna go with me
gonna grow with me
no hesitations or frustrations no iffy's
submissively i love electricity no longer grounded
cause my soul lift me
put up the truth threw up the neuce in the fountain of youth an drowned it
gave it mouth to mouth resistation
lost and found it
in the best situation


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Autumn

"its a girl" he jubilantly rejoiced
i felt the pride and excitement in his voice
what a stride to take, without a choice
she was beautiful and i grinned with delight
as her tiny fingers wrapped around mine
i saw something new in her big blue eyes
she looked back in mine
newborn she cant have much going on
but still seemed to be taking in it all
so small
she screamed when i held her
my unfamiliar cradle
i passed her back quite quickly
feeling unable, unlike me
he knew just what to do
and her cry faded into contentment
i felt no resentment
their bond is immense
in awe watching my brother
become so in love
he has a new aura
with colours of autumn

It was once my home......something is missing

burning fire driving humanity
senseless inanimate creature behind my purity
too fast to catch a glimpse
not seen, perhaps shadowed by an eclipse
residing in my thought, my soul
my blur memory of love and care
radiating from this place, to my heart.... a pair
covering my childish dreams from reality
amazing connection I suffered from a young age
slowly fading with every next page
going bogus can’t stop living
head up high though life I chose feels like lent
paying an emotional price with every instant spent
all what seemed enough just turned rough
sweating love and care on this route and its length
beautiful place of rest adored through my young life
growing up I always knew to find love at home
lately I’m just a bee with echoing buzzes on this big dome

mcee fya, yours was so vivid it brought a tear. A happy time.


Human interaction.
What a mine field.
I can understand
All sorts of things,
Doesn’t stop me railing
Wailing,
Howling to the sky.
Shake my fists and rant
Or sink, insane.
I can want what I want.
Just can’t have it.

hey everyone your local prof again just looking for some feedback on this one ! always appreciate different interpitations and viiews!!!

clean off the face
clean off the taste
which resides on every peace of matter fit ta die
hit the sky
hit the lows
hit the highs
walk on water if it defy's
split the sea's
apihany's
serendipity's
left fate and now her an karma are back together
but thats whatever
cut severed ties
with my spirituality inner termoil and paradise
fell into that tunnel again but saw a pair a lights
an silloette of albino blood against a parasite
there's a kite
attached to my key , well the sky whispers storm warnings
will i be gone tonight or be here when the heavens form morning
forlorning has withered and wilted
as my outlook and lips have tilted
took out books of thought read my mind and rebuilt it
guilted concience
bin gone since it bordered along nonsense
if it doesnt make sense how can i profit from it
climb to peak at this world an jump off the summit
listen to your stomach
you think adam and eve had a taste a death
if you can't stand to look in a mirror
how can you stand to face ya death
lancelot and guinevere
when the tears
and the smoke had cleared then the years
hands a broken friendships still shook
without the fury of yesterday
its the game of life an surely you came just ta play
just a day ,just a week , a year
just a lifetime of overcomeing innadeqeucy's to defeat the fear
the art of science this is the quantum leap of the year
cause you know faith gone come when the reaper appear

Hi theprofessor, you already know how much I love the way you use rhythm. The images in this one are blowing me away, too.

takes alook around

the doors open closed and locked
to the mouths that chose to talk
the mountains growing higher to the feet that chose to walk
eye's open pool's of knowledge draining the colour of the world
mothers of the fathers fathers of the brothers to the other girl
another curl ,
another twist in the story
give you a hand and my ears
so you can grasp what i have to say and listen to it for me
live through the land and my peers
to build a relationship
out of these limbs face and lips
the face recognition software under the barcode on our necks
and the gps that shows if we go right our road connects
taken the precscribed diagnoses of life without the known side effects
except what you and i expect
the times have been kind , kinda
the minds have been tryin to find a
well we dont really know what were looking for
cooking for
took in more
then our fair share
but we know life is more then botox, facelifts and fair hair
replacement plugs and wigs
the plots been dug and we dig
deeper and deeper into the darkness for some insight
in light
well theres some wonderful colours in that black and white
and some secrets soon to be uncovered come back tonight
as the skys become black to night
in the morning we will come back to light

greater cause

i work for a greater cause
when this craters claws ,
made of flaws
made the laws
like blades a law
the same thing that made god ,made atheists , an made allah
live by the sword die by sword
live by the phone die by the cord
die your hair cause thats what the life tell you
wanna use a gun when a knife will do
wanna love all these ladies when a wife will do
wanna love ya'll babies well ya wife will to
fighting for nothing instead of living for something
writeing for what im living what im able to do was giving for something
some king
some queen
some look
some seen
some awake
some dream
sun break into our daily routine
when exposed to the clothes friends and foes
which is which
rich is rich
poor is poor
could you live with less an less
want more an more
i want you to read this
like water and food you need this
from insemination to condemnenation first breath of ya fetus
forget what you don't need
its probally something you won't need
don't bleed if you won't lead
don't breed if your a mom or dad and won't be
if you follow the rules
you might as well open your tear ducts and swallow the pools
wallowin fools
there's a hungry beast named ignorance swallowing schools
trying to grow up
in my house its anerexic dieing when it throw up
this is the school of reality attendance is 99% of the mark so show up
when i open my eyes
i see hope n demise
been through the dope n the highs
i was born with moms follopians tied
came from broken homes ,broken bones , spoken from choken tones
fighting back the tears ,the years ,the peers
to make my carreer
wrote till the eraser's traceing emotion
a face of devotion
im faceing a mountain swimming against the tide faceing the ocean
again defy
the laws of gravity
i came ta fly
my breath became the sky
as long as my brain abides
i wont keep the pain inside
came instride ,now im takeing leaps an bound
six feet deep cant keep me down
dedication courage and drive
is our destination its why were alive

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ima person just like you not
just might do lots
ignite shoe slots
and fights through plots
stand in this dirt
with my hands in this dirt
full of this like i am in this shirt
pull on this lid i'll show you how this cannister work
my pants have three holes how am i supposed to stand in this shirt
light ignite inhale let me show you how this cannibis work
if my plan is ta work
gotta put my feet down underground and start understanding this earth
met helen keller
how were we supposed to speak grab a pen an teller
its magic
is that it
had it
its a place in my heart an im always at it
a padded room
like when i was born
when my mom changed the tapon worn
i came out the woom
out a tune
tweaked the beak a bit
leaked jekylls beaker and left the speaker lit
i was told about this lady called life nice to meet ya bich
lights fight the feet a bit ,
running around in shoes by the time the sun shine on my heels
i need a fit
cause theres an eclipse on my toe tips
never drank liqour only ebalming fluid no ****
born with my dick shaped like my balls now
im always pissin around

Tick clock, tap brain,
Water torture, sap drain.
Sleep dodge, bitterness,
Rant rave, care less.
Tick clock, toss, turn,
Face cave, eye burn.
Too hot, too cold,
Two hours, too old.
Tick clock, mock, whine,
Get up, down wine.
Outside, one sock.
Frisbee tick clock.

immitation oh frustration
i know you!
its not this
the things your bringing to the table
talking over reason its
just more than reason
more than situation
we all know the feelings your explaining
i came out from hiding
we came out from hiding to escape what your'e residing
too much too soon, please let it lie
where fallen rocks and boulders lie
the ones that almost knocked us dead
but still we rose and shook em off our heads
tonight my sweet please just let go
of the hurt as we must come and go
the same as they and you know
i see the dreams you harbour dear
i see them coming true
i feel so surreal as i believe
i feel just like you
dont you be alone
dont you ever fear
i sleep and make a fist
throw it in the air
i dream of her life some may think Insignificant
no far from it most important more prolifarate
for i may touch a thousand souls
from her one hold
walk the path she paved for me
so it carries on

immitation oh frustration
i know you!
its not this
the things your bringing to the table
talking over reason its
just more than reason
more than situation
we all know the feelings your explaining
i came out from hiding
we came out from hiding to escape what your'e residing
too much too soon, please let it lie
where fallen rocks and boulders hide
the ones that almost knocked us dead
but still we rose and shook em off our heads
tonight my sweet please just let go
of the hurt as we must come and go
the same as they and you know
i see the dreams you harbour dear
i see them coming true
i feel so surreal as i believe
i feel just like you
dont you be alone
dont you ever fear
i sleep and make a fist
throw it in the air
i dream of her life some may think Insignificant
no far from it most important more prolifarate
for i may touch a thousand souls
from her one hold
walk the path she paved for me
and so it carries on
cant you see the pattern
dont you feel comfort in the song
for life is never ours my baby
we'll never belong

Re: mcee fya (Post 3496665)
they said her mother never loved her
she's farrel, she'll scretch an bite
i said can i hold her?
as i gazed into her eyes
"dont say i never warned you!"
"but be my guest."
gently i raised her from the cage in which she had been surpressed
wished i had room for em all
so innocent an small
i felt i had to save her
still felt awful to seperate her from the rest
as soon as i saw her i felt us connect
"ive never seen one of that litter be so calm and tame!"
i whispered to her" lily" that shall be your name
she aint wild, she aint vicious
just needs some love an kisses
she aint farrel or untame
give her attention, keep her sane
funny how that very day i had given up
call it chance or fait maybe just plain luck
but we came accross eachother
now she sleeps above my covers
purring me to sleep
i thought nothing could change my wanting
but now she's needing me

oops! sorry guys i posted same poem twice by accident, as i always copy n paste them so i have a copy saved too lol
it is 6am! and i aint been to bed, never mind