Spontaneous Poems

You guys are good. This thread has always attracted the talented.

You've seemed to be gone for a while - missed you.


mngunim, that one was really disquieting.

can man rid himself of his own evils
stone thrones steeples selling forgiviness
depot repo life for livin this
forbodeing fathomed of forsakeness
breakin this
ambillical cord
takein this
lyrical sword
for makein this
more peaganistic virtues
then the antagonistic sheep hurders who blindly hurt u
this fist careing for every person that it hits
this ass not giving a **** where ever it sits
these lungs will take ya breath away
this life wouldnt wanna see you die tommorow so it gives you death today
a holy man right on top of the food chain left ta pray
took the words out ya mouth
whats left ta say
aint nothing that you heard about
aint nothing that youve seen ,
only felt
only dream
cards of fate never shuffled
only dealt
feathers never ruffled
only melt ,when flying to close
ku dos
2 doses of reality to diagnose the fatality
pop open the champagne and toast the formality
to most your validly void
a ghost of a personality i hope you enjoyed
destroyed the android
deployed a canned troy
and fed that little sick boy in freud

i hope ya hungry
dope n money
i hope ya hungry
gippeto was going broke
putting food on the table
for pinnocio's growing oak
i hope ya hungry
dope n money
i hope ya hungry
close ya mouth
open dummy

Copyright@michael dugas The professor Cold lake Alberta Canada


hey everyone what do u think of this one ?

I like the way you keep on going with the same line of thought. Pretty amazing!!


the goodness in everyday life
the smile on your pal’s face
life alone is not good enough
the ones left behind, its pretty rough
to the top is where you headed
with less than a percent in your wage
the person you were is soon to change
all that splendour, left alone in the cage
living in the shades of grey

should have stopped me, should have said hey
could have told you just how I felt
now you are too huge for that belt
in the next life, maybe you weren’t meant
“this ain’t a novel, no black and white”
but why live life in the shades of grey

mngunim i like your ability to contrast the shades an tints one of my favorite forms of expression !!!

thanks proffesor

those long walks between the vines
more desired than our gold mines
for peace in this place radiates
intoxicated in those wines, she was conceived
just for a minute, the world stood still
despite unbearable pleasure she felt
he somehow thought she was on a pill
blame and madness was soon to reign
heartbreak, betrayal gave birth to her
she truly was a love child

I had a really vivid dream last night in which a friend said she didn't understand this. I offer this "translation" for my own peace of mind, not because I think you people need it.


Statement of Claims Some things are important

Would you marry me?

No Way The opinions of others and the record keeping abilities of Church and State are not among them

Would you wear my ring?

If you feel the need to label me as yours. (shrugs) meh
I DO like the symbolism. Declaring love to the world may be.

Would you wear an "engagement' ring?

No. I'd keep knocking it.
And you'd keep getting angry,
Every time I lost the stone. Acquiring "stuff" is not.
But,
I want to give you something.

GOOD!
(Grabs lapels, fiercely thrusts face into other face)
(first, quickly sews lapels on T-shirt)

STATEMENT OF DEMANDS These things are.

1/. Kiss me in the morning,
As if we were both still teenage. Lightheartedness


2/. Open your mouth, like a hungry hatchling,
When I have sashimi in my chopsticks. Generosity, and the ability to receive.

3/. Grin so hard that you can't chew,
Looking in my eyes. A bond so strong it can't die.

4/. Don't object too much,
If I sound like a Tourette's sufferer,
Making love. Toleration (and great sex {leer})

5/. Hold my hand. Lovingkindness.

hey everyone this is one id appreciate feedback on thank you !!!

the day that eye die
watching the rivers cry blood into my vein's
in through my brain
out through terrains
terrible floods a water logged lumber jack in the rain
soaking up the experience
experiments human nature
equations an exercises fit for test
hemoglobin tempature rises the litmus test

smack
talkin , speakin , chirpin
smack
walk in garden eden with the serpent
smack

put the starting gun in ya mouth
the finish line
in an about
the grape vine
rose vines
wrapped around the closed minds
hang the dirty laundry on the clothes line
where you hear that
I herd that from the bovine
aint that the truth
cause he said it
she red it
he saw it on the tv embeded
guess it must be true
if it was'nt me
it must be you
doesnt mean
if this is the only lie ive said !you can trust me dude
you can trust me too !(womans voice)
you can trust me too!(kids voice)
you can trust me too!(elderly gentlemans voice)
you can trust not much trust, be true
shady acts from dusty dudes
the truths not naked it must be nude
from your opinions shes busty too!
i honour an value the truth so respect must be due !!!


thanks again yours truely copyright@ cold lake alberta canada mike dugas the professor aka Thought Process

Hi professor, I love your rhythms.
This is not meant as criticism, but it is how I read your work. Segments have a strongly visceral effect on me, but I read and reread and can't pull my understanding of it into a whole. This one has left me mildly miserable. Not slash-my-wrists miserable but too aware of some of the shortcomings of the world for immediate peace of mind. All your stuff speaks to my emotions rather than my mind. I like it. From your word choices, I assume that is your intent.

As I've said before, I'm not the person for intelligent literary crit. All you get is gut reaction, and in the case of your work, it actually is my gut that reacts.

thank you for your opinion i really appreciate all the feedback i'll try to write one with more beauty that is in the world so it can give you all the pieces to your mind


the pieces of mind
heres a piece a mine
will somebody please define
in these times as it gets
filled with regrets
let downs
lets get down
to the solution
set down the weight of retribution


when all you see is falicy's
open your black holes to another galaxy
honour respect and valory
work hard n play
because as there gets harder days
another show which one you gonna star today
start today
you can relax tommorow
live life to its fullest only way to react to sorrow
reactors are a glow
what you see in the dark
what you see in the heart
human beings a spark
leading in science humans suceeding in art
writeing an reading doin ya part
dont get dizzy spun like the frisbee you threw in the park
stay true in ya heart
when your hungry for food for thought
here's some for ya chewing ta start
everyone start doin ya part



here rate it debate it but most of all demonstrate it peace !!!

That certainly is more forward-looking content, though you should never have to write-to-order. I didn't mean that the other piece was not good. Pieces that put us in touch with the "other side" are also worthwhile.

I'm starting to get a sense of how Nostradamus got his start. If you talk about universal concepts, and do it well, someone will identify closely with it.

That last one is one of 4 off A2K that have gotten under my skin. Thanks.

Has anyone got a ghosty story or poem for the campfire Friday night?

http://able2know.org/topic/18557-12#post-3456413

(There's a Celtic Apple recipe there if you are interested in spicy magic apples)

Thanks, Endymion.

I have a bonfire coming up on the 8th.

Apple Magic seems like it was made for that.

Just don't try the tar barrel rolling!

Have a great bonfire. Hope it's fine weather for you.

Great to see this thread going strong

if there ever was a glimmer of hope
it shone that very day
like the cosmos and the spirits joined
fate came in to play
where dark forces reigned
with intention to steal the beats
suddenly a heavenly army
took to the streets
a protest of peace
voices reached the voids
we will not go!
or be destroyed!
we will not fall silent
we will not give in or fold
our melodies will fight them
those with darkened souls
and so the music played
on into the day
if you listen to your heart
you will hear the army sing

a bit rubbish that but spontaneous nether the less
very impressed with "the proffessor" your writing is taking leaps and bounds and is quite moving x

Hi, mcee fya.

Haven't seen you in ages.

Just read "persist to exist", too.

It's all good stuff.

cheers mcee - good to see you and the great prof on the same page!
hope there's more

inspired to write something - thanks


Silent


This silent moment unturned
A direct line of fire
in the absence of words
I thought i heard
her coolest whisper
The laughter outside her, named
And I thought i saw
some strange reflection
sweep slow
across the shadow of my brain
A lasting note of reason, spun
Spiraling down
through the thick oily tongues
Scared sorrow sounds
in lonely lost season
My pockets dumb
as this empty, blood-broken mouth
Hungry for salt n grease
under scowling oak trees
I head south
A soft ride through the night
Across wildest fens
longing for the coast
My thumb my pride
Where you going, friend?
In the back of a foreign car
sped under stars
Hey, I don't really care
Just take me far
Just take me apart



Endymion 2008