@Mystik,
yo yo chek it
HEY im new to the rap game
and i know my rhymes r kinda lame
started a battle to learn off u guys
afta a while my rap sensationalize
come back in disguise
make your rap look bite size
so gimmie some tips to help my rhyme
so we can battle some other time
and as i say my goodbyes
i say good luck to all u guys
now sit back and watch as my raps ARISE
AND SUPRISE
watch as they drop like FLIES
so send my a rap , and ill reply back
n tell me if my rhyme was GOOD OR WHACK
Mystik .. `` peace to all of ya
good luck