@contrex,
Thank you. The changes you made seem very natrual. And is the reason why you deleted the last sentence wordy? And please help me compare A with B. Which one is better? And could you make more changes to the the better one? Thank you.
A
Dear manager,
Please allow me to take 2 days off work for something urgent. The department I rent expired yesterday. And my landlord asked me to move out in 3 days for there is another renter will move in. so I have to find a new department and make a move as soon as possible. If there are extra arrangements for me during the 2 days, you can tell my partner Lily about them. I will finish them as quickly as I can after my day off.
B
Dear Mr. Smith,
Please allow me to take 2 days off work for an emergency. The apartment I have rent will expired in a couple of days, however, yesterday I was required to move out in 2 days for the landlord had rent it to another one. Therefore, I have to rent a new one and move to it as soon as possible. If there are extra arrangements needing me to deal with during my absence, please transfer to my partner, Lily, whom I will hand over to, or suspend them until I come back to work.