Thu 21 Sep, 2006 10:43 am - Chapter 2: A Figure in the dark
Charlotte went to the balcony and sat there. "Charlotte?" a voice said. She didn't need to turn around to know who it was. "What do you need,... (view)
Thu 21 Sep, 2006 10:42 am - The Mouse Trap
Alpha
?'Uncover my world'
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A lifetime will be revealed,
Great Mysteries will be uncovered.
Come and sit by my side,
Hear my heart before you dare to leave.
And... (view)
Thu 21 Sep, 2006 10:21 am - i'm not much interested on "why" and "What" is it that you wrote this poem. I was more on interested on the poem itself. And i 'was dissapointed'. i didn't... (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:58 am - hn. I don't much like it, BUT I DON'T HATE IT. It's interesting, to be honest enough. Care to share "what" is that 'monsterous character above my sack.'?... (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:53 am - hm...to be honest, i don't much like it. But I appreciate it. I appreciate the message and the way the message was conveyed. I hope you will write more poems, keep up the good work and strive... (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:46 am - Thanks
I like the message and the way it was written. Thanks you for letting me read a good poem
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"Let me read a good poem, and... (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:42 am - Thanks and sorry
sorry for thta...ok, for those who belive in no God/s, um...just think for those affected and just realise how lucky YOU ARE! and thanks Edy. (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:39 am - I HATE IT. IT IS NONSENSE. IT IS NOTHING BUT TRASH...AND IF YOU BELIVE ME, YOU ARE INSANE! heck! this is a very nice poem. I appreciate it...coz my dad's...far, far, away. I am touched. But if... (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:32 am - The Mouse Trap
Girl floating; in blue
On an Autumn cement field
Things so hidden well
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The Tree Talk
I went to her grave
Offered some whittret flower
And... (view)
Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:14 am - *sigh* Are you sure?
Ok...to tell you honestly, i wasn't that much interested on the 1st lines. I know that you can do much about it and make it better. Ok, back to the point>
1. put... (view)
