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Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:32 am
The Mouse Trap
Girl floating; in blue
On an Autumn cement field
Things so hidden well
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The Tree Talk
I went to her grave
Offered some whittret flower
And sat there; weeping
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Four Seasons
You Shatter my dreams
You build up all of my fears
And coat me with tear
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Faceless Vampire
His fangs were so dull
Blood he have wanted is mine
Flaming eyes made love
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The Wind
Dreams were washed away
The wind had killed all of them
As what i have said
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I will not give interpretations and explanations. I want you to think and seek the hidden things behind these lines. The titles may not have relevance at a glance, but i assure you, they have BIG IMPACTS on the message of the Haiku. Please tell me what you think of this. COmments, critics and suggestions ARE MOST WELCOME. Thanks and Good bless
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"OH NO! i have committed a grave mistake! what a fool i am to give you everything unsaid!"
~Blue Feather~