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Remedy (short poem)

 
 
Reply Thu 31 Aug, 2006 02:57 pm
To see the summer nights,
Is like a remedy for the soul.
It heals the mind,
It cleanes the heart,
It's sunset warms your skin.
The perfect remedy,
For anyday.
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Blue Feather
 
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Reply Tue 5 Sep, 2006 05:53 am
hm...to be honest, i don't much like it. But I appreciate it. I appreciate the message and the way the message was conveyed. I hope you will write more poems, keep up the good work and strive for improvement
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"It is I who shall say, You may never give me perfection...but It is also I who shall say, You have given me good impressions"
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