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Tue 29 Jul, 2003 07:31 am
When night falls
And darkness calls
The silence spreads
From the light it dreads
Expose the soul
No longer whole
Twist the mind
It's gone in kind
Another night starts
For the broken heart.
Hi, Wilso,
I don't think that I've ever seen you submit your poetry before. That was quite good. I particularly like, "...expose the soul, no longer whole"
Never written a poem before.
Well, now that you know you can, keep it up.
u can feel the angst in this poem Wilso....
That's what I was wondering...
I don't think he i sokay - based on a comment he made on another thread.
Hey Wilso, anything we can help you with ?
Wow, Wilso. That's a powerful poem. Spare and really packs a punch.
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