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Thu 23 Nov, 2006 11:35 pm
Meth
I laugh at you
teeth rotting away
The decaying of your life
Pipes of glass sho you the way
Members of your family cut with a knife
The blood of your dreams
Drip off your lips
As if on call for your scene
Gotta get a fix
Laughing away I watch as you lean
Crashing as you fall
society is crumbling
People won't answer the call
let you slip to nothing
a waste to us all
I laugh at you
nothing but skin
Brother I won't
I've seen where youve been
I have read the note
You cannot fool me again
I wait,in my heart a stake
For now it is your turn
Same mistake's
but I figured you'd learn
I laugh at you
And cry as I do.
I like your style of writing
and the poem itself
It's sharp
I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
I like this a lot. Strong subject and crisp writing.
Meth will change your out-look on life
like cuttin your face up with a sharp knife
personality changes and brain cells become empty spaces
Losing your wealth slowly but losing your health knowingly
Dancing with the devil in just 1 toke
who woulda thought you got so fucked up off something u smoke
the **** sends you broke
n ready to croak
With a basic written
hope u read this n see crack then start sprintin
Leaka I don't know if you read this one or not but I feel the description is pretty clear? no?
Laugh at you
teeth rot away
decay of life
show the way
pipe of glass
cuts like knife
blood of dreams
drips off lips
Gotta get a fix
laugh away
watch you lean
Crashing fall, crumbling scene
no one answers
the silent call
slip to nothing
waste to all
laugh at you
nothing but skin
I won't go
where you have been
I read the note
don't fool again
it's your turn now
same mistakes
figured you'd learn
laugh at you
cry as I do.
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