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Canadian Soldier

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garth809
 
Reply Sun 19 Nov, 2006 04:41 pm
Blistering the skin as is the sun
Boots are heavy, feet are tired
keep on walking, a shot is fired
a pain in my side, I want to hide
Sun fades to black. pain to subside
fallen soldier, a wasted soul
For what. a Single goal
Oil
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Shanster20
 
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Reply Sun 19 Nov, 2006 08:45 pm
nice. fills me with a rage and disappointment that us Canucks got dragged into that BS
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garth809
 
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Reply Sun 19 Nov, 2006 09:10 pm
thanksman
That was The point
Short and to the point
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