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Mystic Poetry

 
 
LEENA
 
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Reply Tue 27 Mar, 2007 09:49 am
DUDE
talk about that MOOD :wink:
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LEENA
 
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Reply Tue 27 Mar, 2007 09:54 am
and read your mail Naima -- like so totally NOW.
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Tue 27 Mar, 2007 09:54 am
well...
the last time i had this MOOD a child died
an innocent child just born DIED
for gods great sake
so this time i'm hoping it's you! :wink: Laughing

the poem...not the sort i was talking about actually
post something deep lee
i'm serious
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LEENA
 
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Reply Wed 28 Mar, 2007 12:57 pm
You don't really want me to die, do you? Shocked
I make this life a whole lot interesting for you as you do for me, c'mon friends stick together.
Unlikewise, you seem to be fond of mumbling curses about people's graves before they are dead. Crying or Very sad

Oh what the hell, and hey, I know you weren't tralking of a silly comedy poem but I deserve this break after all those intense moments, like anyone and everyone else. Smile

The poem then -- next post.

Love,
Leena.
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LEENA
 
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Reply Wed 28 Mar, 2007 01:06 pm
PAWNS OF FATE

We are all
the pawns of fate
Trapped in
false sedate
Every step
that we take
We make
another mistake
And after all
for whose sake
are we hanged
on the stake
To be condemned
and burnt to cake
And rubbed like ashes
on a blank slate
So torn down
that we cannot fake
Even when we try
our rotten fate

Leena
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Thu 29 Mar, 2007 09:03 am
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I make this life a whole lot interesting for you as you do for me, c'mon friends stick together.


oh c'mon lee, you know i didnt mean that!!!

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you seem to be fond of mumbling curses about people's graves before they are dead

Embarrassed yeah, i kinda do have that prob!!!!
but hey, its very helpful sometimes!

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I know you weren't tralking of a silly comedy poem but I deserve this break after all those intense moments, like anyone and everyone else.


NOT WHEN NAIMA DOESN:T WANT IT!!!

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The poem then -- next post.

it made my eve!!!! Love it...infact probably your best one(next to "VENGEANCE" ofcourse)


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Love,
Leena

are you saying i don't?

Love you all the same
Naima
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bretter
 
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Reply Fri 30 Mar, 2007 03:10 pm
these are so good
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LEENA
 
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Reply Sun 1 Apr, 2007 03:10 am
Quote:
these are so good


Thankyou.
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LEENA
 
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Reply Thu 12 Apr, 2007 10:54 am
Naima wrote
Quote:

Quote:
The poem then -- next post.

it made my eve!!!! Love it...infact probably your best one(next to "VENGEANCE" ofcourse)


Here ot is then:

VENGEANCE

The seething scars you put on my heart
The bitter venom you fill me with
Burning, boiling, inside my veins
Will someday find its way out

The times I’ve wept hidden in my room
The agony that you put me through
The lustful hatred in my heart
Will someday find its way out

The chance that I’ve been waiting for
The moment to finally strike
The desire to destroy I’ve been holding back
Will someday find its way out

I’ll lock my lonely eyes with you
I’ll play my only favorite trick
And softly, sweetly watch you drift
And you fade away into oblivion

As I kiss you tenderly down to death
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Sun 15 Apr, 2007 12:25 am
Hey Lee
Thanks for posting that...
Written anything new lately?
I guess you're really hitting on the books these days, huh?
good luck! (but after you get the luck don't forget THE purpose! :wink: )
Regards,
Naima
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